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Writing quality wise it's still rough on the edges. But definitely a hidden gem on the eyes of the public. As for updating chapters, well not on fast side but you can definitely expect better quality of writing unlike some *ehem!* who just outright post them without even checking it. I know they're on their own but edit them properly. Well for character design and world background, expect a cliches of wuxia and martial arts kinda novel. That is if the author decides to spice things up, not ruin the overall quality of the story. Hopefully, unlike some authors who decides to rewrite the thing. I hope this helps although I know it's not much but hey I aleast gave a proper review unlike trolls who just wants the world burn.
While I was quite invested initially. Over time the book become convoluted and too confusing. There were time-skips/changes which at the time weren't explained well and led to me just skimming the pages, hoping to get back to the story. So while the grammar was good and the story seemed fun, I was just unable to get back into the story and my interests had faded.
This is an amazing novel. At the Beginning you can see Silver adjusting to his new life in his new body. And I quite like how Silver slowly exposes his knowledge and skills, not too slow no too fast. In all honesty the novel is awesome and deserves praise! Just keep up the good work and pump those chapters harder than Saitama's punches!
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it is a fun story / novel, but novels with stories like that have often been published with different histories, if possible try to make something even more interesting (no need for new novels) could be the next update improved again, and continue try, don't take or revise other novels too often to make the novel more interesting because there will still be people who read a lot and will know it, so try to have your own original novel (not the revised results for yourself / change it to match our own story) try to see the original life then develop with imagination to fit blah blah blah blah, that's like 😅😅✌️ good luck 👍
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