Review Detail of Jezzekiel in Celestial Of The Void

The story line seems okay, it's really hard to read due to the numerous grammar mistakes but those can be solved easily. I was confused at the flashback as I did not really know what was happening. Also, it would be nice to have a clear example of the currency, what are moon coins in pounds or yen? Apart from that, it seems to be thought out and there is clearly effort put in here, good job!