JackSpades
Can anyone tell me the update schedule? It’ll be really helpful... Looking at the idea gives a lot of re:monster vibes, but hopefully it will turn out to be different. As of now, the MC is slowly growing stronger. Lots of potential, but needs more description of the surroundings. Spoiler alert (I guess) - The only thing you basically know is that he’s in the world of a game he bought for his son and the world contains monsters. Anyways, does anyone know how many chapters the author updates per week?
As many people commented, it has started very similarly to Re: Monster, but the MC doesn't seem as cruel. There are very glaring grammar issues, syntax problems, and some troubles painting scenes, though the intent always comes through. It appears to be someone's initial writing attempt and bears some promise. I recommend the author focus on developing independent storylines, and editing the chapter a day or two after the initial draft is done.
I’m just rating this with everything at 5 stars except stability of updates because I don’t remember the last time I read this. Anyways, for the new readers, the author is either on a hiatus or dropped. The author hasn’t updated in about 4 months or so, and didn’t give a heads-up. It’s better if you do not read this with hopes for an update. Hopefully, it isn’t because the author is suffering from issues.
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Pretty good so far though I'm a but disappointed on the update schedule, overall i love the familiar themes and the way it tells its story. I do want to add that I love the idea of starting off from a goblin to evolve and improve as you go as I can name several another light novel that share similar themes and that i enjoy greatly
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