Sorry to say that the translation needs a lot of work. Seems interesting though. The review character limit is cringeworthy. 140 characters with a phone sucks. Change it pls...
JackSpades
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LIKESo if i write something on the level of invisible dragon i am suddenly immune to critics from non authors (disclaimer: not saying this is on that level)
Sidrex:You got so much pride there man, how bout you write youre own book. Better shut up kid.
I heard a lot of crying with little content. I dont even know where to start with this. Mh... ok there are 2 points you should read up on. 1 is constructive critisim and the second is argumentative phallacy specially under the point of name-calling as you have a heavy problem with that. Hope that helps you keep your words empty of hot air.
Sidrex:Oh yeah how bout you write your own book and i say to you that it suck and you better quit cause you have no future being an author. You just go home and play house with you're mother and it'll help in her depression for raising a child like you are.
Sidrex:Oh yeah how bout you write your own book and i say to you that it suck and you better quit cause you have no future being an author. You just go home and play house with you're mother and it'll help in her depression for raising a child like you are.
SweetsTomato:Guys, chill out. Don't you see the reviewer only make this review and never make other review or comments on other novel, don't u think it's a bit suspicious?