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  • rafa101
    rafa1011yr
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    Isn't this just Lord Of The People: I Recruited A Mutant Succubus From The Start ? I'm pretty sure this is just a copy of a half translated novel

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  • rafa101
    rafa1012yr
    Commented

    cant wait for more!

    Ch 592 Chapter 592
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    Darius Supreme
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  • rafa101
    rafa1012yr
    Commented

    anyone know if theyre gonna pick it back up or is it dead?

    Ch 530 Chapter 65 The Rise (7)
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    Abyss Domination
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  • rafa101
    rafa1012yr
    Commented

    the grammar is good but the speech seems awkward if she's vulgar she should speak informally like "bro" or saying "don't go falling for your sis now, you creep". Could be a minor imprivement imo but the story seems nice. [img=recommend]

    "Huh! Tris, I know you very well. The moment you were released you were planning on ghosting me, weren't you?! I will not let that happen, you are coming with me."
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  • rafa101
    rafa1012yr
    Commented

    No chapter today :(

    Ch 1309 A Gamble
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    The Legendary Mechanic
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  • rafa101
    rafa1013yr
    Commented

    i did a bit of napkin math and if the experience curve maintains iits exponential increase based on level differential he only need to kill someone about 9 levels higher to get to level 100. With a max skilled ability as long as he doesn't face some lightning resistant it shouldn't be too hard unless the hp growth is also exponential which based on the current scaling shouldnt be too hard.

    50 damage per cast was amazing at the Amateur stage if Darius was to use himself as a gauge. He currently had 150 HP even with 15 Strength and 10 Endurance, meaning that should a clone of him appear, he could be killed in three casts!
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  • rafa101
    rafa1013yr
    Replied to DaFukinSage

    but wouldnt supremely poeerful individuals offset the avarege? or is it the median of a given species which would not be offset as much by the inflated stats of individuals since there should only be a few.

    Strength: 10
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  • rafa101
    rafa1013yr
    Commented

    do you mean physique?

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  • rafa101
    rafa1013yr
    Commented

    why does she say "masta" constantly i mean even a little girl can say master i don't know why but it really peeves me. am i the obly one?

    『Masta just have to think of 'START' then the roulette can spin, also Lily can do it for Masta.』
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  • rafa101
    rafa1013yr
    Replied to wintermist1994

    Hey man i haven't started reading the novel but you should work on your grammar in your own reviews because the first paragraph seems well written (all I've read so far) but your reviews give the impression that you can barely write properly. Hope the comment helps! I'll give a real review after reading a couple of chapters.

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  • rafa101
    rafa1013yr
    Replied to Eonia

    at that point he doesn't know how big he is either. Since size is relative and the homie didn't get transported with a meter.

    Ch 2 Chapter 2
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    The last Daimon of Primus Planan
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  • rafa101
    rafa1013yr
    Replied to Hyoroz

    Evolving them with the intention of creating followers gives them a base 'loyalty' he needs to expand it through helping them develop or other means to gain true faith. His main goal right now can be considered creating a civilization and helping them do so and expanding their world view as he increases their reasoning and potential along with his great power makes them see him as their deity.

    Ch 6 Chapter 6
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  • rafa101
    rafa1013yr
    Replied to David_Drake

    Hope you give the novel a try and give me more feedback though! I appreciate reading my readers' thoughts on my novel.

    Ch 2 Chapter 2
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  • rafa101
    rafa1013yr
    Replied to David_Drake

    brainwashing for sure as for the instant romance not really. i wouldnt want such a stale relationship in my novel she sees him as a divine being thus cant fathom any romance between the two atm. He needs to build a relationship and make her see herself as his companion not a servant and this takes time.and effort even more when he gets so easily immersed in his projects and using his powers.

    Ch 2 Chapter 2
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  • rafa101
    rafa1013yr
    Replied to Ant_3755

    Hey

    Ch 10 Chapter 10 Algar
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  • rafa101
    rafa1013yr
    Replied to _Neith_

    Thanks i apreciate the support! :D

    Ch 12 Chapter 12 Algar
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  • rafa101
    rafa1013yr
    Replied to rafa101

    Didn't mean for it to sound combative if it did. I do appreciate the feedback!

    Ch 1 Chapter 1
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  • rafa101
    rafa1013yr
    Replied to Tmii

    He doesn't really hide his power. He just can't go full on fight the other god at the moment since they have the support they have. The other gods are just as powerful as he is but they have a millions of followers so it would make it difficult for him to face them head on. Not to mention they are many and he is an equal in a one on one. He first shows his power on chapter 6 by cursing a race if you read that far. Now onto the true power comment. Two people with great power fight the one who has ants distracting him will most likely lose. Either way I hope you give my novel a chance since I feel like it is a pretty fun read, but if you don't enjoy this type of novel then that's cool too. We all have stuff we like and dislike.

    Ch 1 Chapter 1
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  • rafa101
    rafa1013yr
    Replied to Ant_3755

    Thanks for the review. I guess the real action will start off side stories detailing the effects many of the changes his experimenting and evolving creates. So if you want that exiting action it's coming chapter 9+ these first chapter are setting up many of the creatures you'll see later on. I do hope you keep reading!

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  • rafa101
    rafa1013yr
    Replied to Ant_3755

    I'm thinking snakes and lizard monsters in the near future. Birds will evolve on their own since his followers can't catch birds and he's too lazy and focused on other things to go out of his way for them.

    Ch 5 Chapter 5
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