Reviews of Sky Fall Legend

Hey guys, its the author! This is my first novel the first book I've EVER written in my short life so please let me know how you like it. Especially so for anyone who believes there are areas where I can improve, I would be very grateful for your response. This is a story about MC who came from modern earth, but due to an unfortunate series of events he is forced into reincarnation and everything changes! I hope this book will be different from the traditional or typical fantasy books, where the MC reincarnates with a mega cheat code and then instantly becomes a badass. Our MC here will for sure be a badass, but he'll have to learn and improve slowly. I've been working on the world background for awhile so I should be able to keep a very stable release rate unless something dangerous happens. Please if you like the story give me ratings! Give me power stone votes! And if you hate the story, write a review and tell me why! I appreciate you just for reading! Thanks guys, Dragon

This novel is one of the better originals. Author has made many paths available for this novel to thread into. The world and everything around is being slowly revealed its like a girl being a bit of a tease which makes you wanna read more.

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This story had a nice start and a good world development, but the author had to make the women objects of satisfaction. Too much rapid and other dark elements involved.... I get most authors can’t help but use Ntr to influence the readers emotions but it’s too much here, that it thwarts the story.

More please😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁.

This novel, i dont know if im stupid or what but i cant seem to understand plot at all it jumps from one place to another in seconds. The plot is so twisted it you cant follow.

Sudden leaps in story line, needs more background and the characters need more filling. The framework of the storyline is good but needs lots of background and better transistions between parallel story line. Whats good is that its different from the other fantasy story lines. And it makes it much more interesting that I can foresee many twists and turns in the storyline in the future.It would be good if there are more chapters released with the existing chapters reworked since there are exciting hints about the story line but which will not come out if the transistions are not smoother, more background given, the characters are fleshed out more.Looking forward to an exciting story which is unique in its own way and which have several differences from the regular or mainstream stories which are presently there in this particular speciality. This has body tempering line, sword line, mage line and various other forces.Its addictive.

This is my first time commenting on a book and I must say it's a really nice book. Unique cultivation system with the ancient pharaoh of a thing. Nice supporting characters. Only issue and also an advice is if you could make women less objectified cuz all the women so far has just been as a tool in a scheme whether they know it or not. Let's have stronger females. And pleaseeeee I hope our First Lady isis is not touched by the white demon. Am a guy by the way. Thumbs up

At first I was really reluctant to read an original cultivation novel, for several reasons. But this one is definitely good! I was only planning to read 5 chapters but then I realized I was already in ch 7! I HAD an obsession with Egyptian mythology before. I really really like how you could put it in a cultivation novel. Cough* haha I'll rate it now Writing quality-4.5/5 grammar is okay. Spelling is okay. But there's still quite a few mistakes there. Stability of updates: 5/5 I know this one is new but it already has a lot of chap. Story development: 5/5 I love how it has a lot of potential. Character design: 5/5 I love little Joe. He is too cute rn 🤣🤣 I also love his parents. Isis and Osiris. Osiris is an OP dad and Isis is a wise mom. World background 5/5 what else could I say? It's definitely good! The only problem with this novel is its cover! Hahaha. I hope you could find one that looks catchy. When I saw it before, I actually brushed it aside. Hahaha I'm sorry, I really judge a book by it's cover 😂 Another gem added in my library. Definitely a worthy read!

This is a really good book. It has a really interesting plotline going and the world building is very original. There is also plenty of mysterious happenings going on which I love. I can't wait to read more.

Best book I ever read in a long time, keep on going!!!! Good luck with the rest of it. I can't wait for more of it. I can't think of anything else to say about it.

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Want to be immersed in a world you never heard of before but can’t help the addiction for more and more… Read it. I’m positive this is the beautiful beginning of a strong series with relatable characters holding abilities one can only dream of.. or are they’re possibilities real 🤔

Overall, the story is great so far. The main character and side characters are given time to be fleshed out while the world building takes place. The author somehow manages to write a cultivation novel that’s story is founded upon the mystery of the protagonist’s real identity. I would recommend this story to anyone who loves cultivation novels. Although this novel is different from mainstream cultivation novels, I find that as long as you give it a try, you will find yourself enjoying the novel and waiting for more.

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ONE WORD AWESOME!!!!!!!..............................................................................................................................................

One of the best original novel .................................... ..................................,...,,,,,,,,,.....,,,,,???....???,..?!’ Fully recommend

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