Review Detail of Dva in Sky Fall Legend

Sudden leaps in story line, needs more background and the characters need more filling. The framework of the storyline is good but needs lots of background and better transistions between parallel story line. Whats good is that its different from the other fantasy story lines. And it makes it much more interesting that I can foresee many twists and turns in the storyline in the future.It would be good if there are more chapters released with the existing chapters reworked since there are exciting hints about the story line but which will not come out if the transistions are not smoother, more background given, the characters are fleshed out more.Looking forward to an exciting story which is unique in its own way and which have several differences from the regular or mainstream stories which are presently there in this particular speciality. This has body tempering line, sword line, mage line and various other forces.Its addictive.