Review Detail of IvoryDragon in Sky Fall Legend
Review detail
Hey guys, its the author! This is my first novel the first book I've EVER written in my short life so please let me know how you like it. Especially so for anyone who believes there are areas where I can improve, I would be very grateful for your response. This is a story about MC who came from modern earth, but due to an unfortunate series of events he is forced into reincarnation and everything changes! I hope this book will be different from the traditional or typical fantasy books, where the MC reincarnates with a mega cheat code and then instantly becomes a badass. Our MC here will for sure be a badass, but he'll have to learn and improve slowly. I've been working on the world background for awhile so I should be able to keep a very stable release rate unless something dangerous happens. Please if you like the story give me ratings! Give me power stone votes! And if you hate the story, write a review and tell me why! I appreciate you just for reading! Thanks guys, Dragon
Sky Fall Legend
IvoryDragon
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Not so sure what defines a harem? Various beautiful women who are romantically involved with the MC to a greater or lesser degree? There will certainly be this. Merely, the MC will not marry many women like his father has done. If that counts as a harem then yes, there will be a harem.
Lonely_citizen:Author can u please tell me if there’s harem or not, stories with harem rub’s me in a wrong way. So it would be nice if u give me an answer.
The only time I have a problem with harems is when they come in between the MC and his cultivation or the story in some way.
IvoryDragon:Not so sure what defines a harem? Various beautiful women who are romantically involved with the MC to a greater or lesser degree? There will certainly be this. Merely, the MC will not marry many women like his father has done. If that counts as a harem then yes, there will be a harem.
I mean being that the MC is still a child i wonder where you find that vibe. Regardless, you won't need to worry.
exceed12:Harem is good but i can see ntr vibe in the story if there is ntr i am gonna quit
IvoryDragon:I mean being that the MC is still a child i wonder where you find that vibe. Regardless, you won't need to worry.
Hi ivory dragon. Am a book reviewer and for a first book it's been great so far. The story is unique in its own. However bass on my time reviewing books. I want to pint out some things. The MC's growth time is taking too long. He is still 6 years old. At least at the end of book 1 he should have at least been 10 years. Then at the end of book 2 he should be getting ready to revenge in book 3. Also the villain should background is to shallow as all we know about him and his cohorts is that they are sex depraved maniacs
No backstory on the irreconcilable hatred between him and the MC's family. We should know about him and also We still don't know who sabotaged the defenses as it should have been enormous leading him into a trap. Also I believe the MC's fathers should know Enora's child doesn't belong to him as powerful as he is.
Also in book 2 we should have information on what's happening back home. And you can also cut down on some unnecessary information as other important things should come in. Lastly, there should strong female characters who can stand on their own and not all female characters should be tools of satisfaction and also details shouldn't be explicit on how females are violated as it might later on decrease your number of readers.
Temi_Amoo:Also in book 2 we should have information on what's happening back home. And you can also cut down on some unnecessary information as other important things should come in. Lastly, there should strong female characters who can stand on their own and not all female characters should be tools of satisfaction and also details shouldn't be explicit on how females are violated as it might later on decrease your number of readers.
I always felt that I took too long in giving some of the underlying information in this book. Also it’s true that strong female characters don’t have a large enough role in this book. It became difficult to continue the story because there wasn’t enough balance. I took a complete different approach in my next book as a result. Thank for helping me articulate some of these thoughts we share it will benefit this novel directly.
Temi_Amoo:No backstory on the irreconcilable hatred between him and the MC's family. We should know about him and also We still don't know who sabotaged the defenses as it should have been enormous leading him into a trap. Also I believe the MC's fathers should know Enora's child doesn't belong to him as powerful as he is.
Always help to help bro. If I can help in anyway just let me know. There is always a way to salvage the situation of balance. Hope to see better things in the upcoming chapters
IvoryDragon:I always felt that I took too long in giving some of the underlying information in this book. Also it’s true that strong female characters don’t have a large enough role in this book. It became difficult to continue the story because there wasn’t enough balance. I took a complete different approach in my next book as a result. Thank for helping me articulate some of these thoughts we share it will benefit this novel directly.
IvoryDragon:I always felt that I took too long in giving some of the underlying information in this book. Also it’s true that strong female characters don’t have a large enough role in this book. It became difficult to continue the story because there wasn’t enough balance. I took a complete different approach in my next book as a result. Thank for helping me articulate some of these thoughts we share it will benefit this novel directly.
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Temi_Amoo:Is there anyway we could communicate privately to be more free in my feedbacks