Reviews of In Naruto World With Instant Mastery Cheat
In Naruto World With Instant Mastery Cheat
HentaiGod
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Hi guys! I am shamelessly giving myself a 5 star review coz I am shameless. Anyway I had actually written this in fanfic.net but somehow I couldn't log in and I got bored trying to write it over again so now with my renewed vigor I shall write my own awesome fanfic.
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As of chapter six, this novel is a complete butchering of the original story. It's to the point where some of the characters in the original story don't exist, some who shouldn't exist, do exist. Some characters were even made up by the author himself. It feels like very little time and effort were put into in the way of plot, it feels very lacking. The story is rushed, the dialog is rushed, the main character is an asshat that cares about nothing but showing off. It's your very stereotypical harem-building/power trip wish-fulfillment fantasy novel.
I mean this novel is quite funny and a good way to pass time but guys like come on this novel getting into top 2 is actually pretty insulting for those guys who actually think about their novels carefully(not that im an author though just symphatizing with them)it's not like i'm against the writing style and like I said the story is funny but this story doesn't have an actual plot and just full of things that the author put together and jammed it in the story not to mention the background is taken from another show the only thing unique is the author's fantasy just here to say that this story is really overrated
The grammar is terrible, and the content is even more cringe than anything I’ve ever read before not to mention the author jerking off a person who seems like a complete retard considering the extent he grew to in 2 years of having the ability to master any skill to above and beyond and he’s only a mid chunin at max considering he grew during the first fight. In all could have been a cool story if the writer wasn’t as I suspect a 12 year old with not much experience in writing. Hopefully they take the criticism rather than listen to all the other 12 year olds who don’t realize how cringey this actually is. I’m 16 by the way before anyone starts on how it’s wrong for a 30 something year old person to criticize a kid, I also really hope your young or at least around my age otherwise this is going to be awkward.
I don't understand why would anyone read this. Powerful at a young age and also f**ked at the age of 6 because yeah. Eazy days ended and then he left that Naruto world to other worlds and he is learning everything and different means to gain power... right now there is magic and i bet there will be qi and sh*t. Fanfiction by a guy that wants everything.
On a path of stupidity who needs plot right. Whilst ur at it who needs character develpment right. Heck who cares that the comedy is poor to make up for the lack of substance. But for you to turn the main character (naruto not this gary stu you have conjured from the depths of depravity) into a clone of a one dimensinal side character this king can no no longer tolerate this stain to our universe Congractualations you've succesfull managed to do the impossible; take a trashy series (naruto, if your stupidity surpassed this king's initial analysis) and make it worse But this king would endure the reading of this ten times over before this king even considers lowering himself to the horrors of fanfiction *shudder*
