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How was it hard?? Isnt there like 20 chapters in the pat ahead?
Kinda dont like the whole soul connection thing...makes the whole relationships and harem thing feels cheap. like no effort or anything like that judg bam after diana its going to be another person that eill hwve a connection and so on...and of course the previous already connected harem members cant tell him no since they know how it feels like
bro let's be honest here...the MC was never smart to begin with so just read with the expectation that you are reading a grown adult with the mentality of an 8 year old and the emotional maturity of a toddler.
The story is kind of getting out of hand with the timelines...like he was talking to the clan heads to open a restaurant then suddenly he buying slaves who he found out are the mothers of some of the strongest people in konoha and instead of giving them back to konoha he is trying to make a secret base?? Or am I missing something?
I love the fruit power....since most fruits in one piece is kind of conceptual so the drain fruit can drain pretty much everything and add it to him, like stats, skills, even other devil fruits and he pretty much immortal since he can drain lifespan and so on...it's pretty good. Guess all that when's he awakens though.
And nope sadly removing the endbringers and even killing scion will not stop the conflict since the golden morning aftereffect was even worst if you read the original...other earth open portals to earth bet and the shards were trying to evolve into the new entities and warlords and so on...worm is like a weird death world where it's a lose-lose situation you just pick the one that doesn't hurt as much.
I do trust that you have a specific vision for the story, just hopefully you don't forget that any superpowered hero and villain is driven to conflict by his shard...it's like a weird amplification of negTive and conflict drive in their host...and the amount of people with thinker powers that kind of control the world from the background is huge, so even though he is a blind spot and anything he make sure has the same blind spot the effect of those items on the people is not hidden since whatever he sells will have a national effect to global effect depending on what he is doing.