Comments of chapter undefined of Limitless Dream System: Primordial Creation
Limitless Dream System: Primordial Creation
SageGodVerhar
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OK I HAVE TO SAY IT I LOVE THIS STORY AND I BEEN USING IT ASS FAP MATERIAL FOR A LONG TIME BUT AS TIME PASSES WE READERS HAVE STARTED TO LOSE HOPE ON THIS STORY AS 5 MONTHS HAS PAST AND WE NEED TO AT LEAST TELL US IF THIS STORY WILL DIE OR WILL IT LIVE AND WHEN CAN WE SEE IT BACK AGAIN THAT IS ALL WE THE READERS ASK FOR OF YOU AUTHOR
The other worlds are taking too much away from your core story unless it was an original world you created. What I personally like about this seriess was the fresh feeling of your story. Personally your MC doesn't need anybody else's powers to be OP. You did that with just his basic bloodlines and physiques. If you're doing a rewrite, my opinions is just get rid of all the other anime aspects, outside of admiration or inspiration on MC, and focus on your core story. Cuz focusing on where to put him in different animes is taking up a lot of time. It took forever to get to this critically important Dragon Ceremony and that's with multiple time skips. My point is you have such a great unique story and seemingly a lot of original ideas, it's disheartening for me to see you rely so heavily on other people's finished works. I get it of you wanted to make a fanfic story where he goes to different anime worlds, but don't underestimate your own work. The characters you have can stand on their own. And also, you need to deepen the affection between Marcus and Aeris. Think about it: this is and Immortal Goddess that traveled the multiverse for untold amount of years looking for someone to simply see her and she found him! The fact that their souls are that unique they should have an instant soul link upon their first contact, and he needs to feel something deeper emotions towards her, especially after hearing her backstory and how she's basically spent her entire immortal life trying to find him.
