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why can't she just transfer the knowledge to his mind? even as a spirit that seems very, very simple tbh.
that's definitely what they said.
if this is being written in real time rather than translated from a complete work, then PLEASE stop with these "little did they know" kinds of sentences. it really kills the suspense. you were building tension with the monster army, shifted to her recovery and used it to build more tension that this disaster is going to be major, but then derail it all to say "oh but something good is going to happen for her." just let the story take us that, the hints kill it.
Defenders?? 👀👀
Pure evil is still "pure" 🤣🤣🤣
yeah but she's very prideful which is her fatal flaw. she estimated their potential once, according to her own standards, deeming them burdens and unworthy of further attention from herself.
it's likely because she still doesn't know FH fused with Davis' soul. she likely thought that the minute they arrived in the higher plane, FH's enrgy signature would leak and be traceable. however, FH has already fused with Davis and undergone mutations, so it's energy shouldn't leak until Davis actually uses it.
that won't last long at all. people gonna question where all these loyal beautiful girls just pop up from around you
Because that would require too much time, plus he himself doesn't have credible name within that market to attract such buyers. He would have to get lucky for rumors of how he got the bones to even reach the buyers and more lucky for them to believe the rumors and approach him.
SAME
man i really enjoy the premise of this story, but the execution is just too off-putting. this chapter info dumped all of Lilith's past but for what? the main character isn't learning any of this information! us readers are learning about a rank beyond supreme, yet the MC hasn't even hit the first level of magic or journeyed anywhere smh. he isn't being told the info, moreover can't even use the info, so it's useless to us right now. I'm really late to read this story but my advice to the author is to redo this. as it is, we keep getting pulled out of the scenes that are happening to be told something that isn't vital to the MC at this stage of his life.
do we even need all this backstory all at once? Lilith isn't the main character smh
comprehension of the *sword, maybe?
i understand your thoughts but before the test, they weren't his apprentices, they were just average students trying to come up and he's a lofty tutor mage. even after becoming his apprentices, he didn't involve himself in their affairs. only if they reach the senior mage level will he personally teach them and build that relationship.