nice.........nice.........nice.........nice.........nice.........nice.........nice.........nice.........nice.........nice.........nice.........nice.........nice.........nice.........nice.........nice.........nice.........nice.........nice.........nice.........nice.........nice.........nice.........nice.........nice.........nice.........nice.........nice.........

it's much better than the original story author sama. i am waiting for your new updates.

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hahaha!!!!

can't wait for the next chapt.....

author sama please add a cultivation world too. heheheh

Haaaiiizzzz ????

Author please read the TDG again. So that you'll the the names and correct spelling of the characters of the novel.

I feel that the story is getting boring to read. For Me. Sorry

What about wood release? I hope he'll help tsunade to learn the technique.

I feel like he is more idiot than elena.

Big yellow is the almighty dog right? Hehehe!!!!!! Oh! The dragonhorse i think.

Sublime notion is he or she? Damn so mess.....

Where's the next chapter?

He is more like a coward human now than before he was accepting the last trial. Tsk toooo dissappointingg.

A very interesting fanfic story here. I like reading it without skipping. Good job author.

I think the forgot the spiritual fire goddess. Maybe she already gone because ye yan became spiritual fire god.

The mc knows what hinata was thinking bt didn't approach her do anything for her onw good.

👍👍👍 a side story of TDG too please.