Andylovescandy
Oh boy, this story is all over the place... First, the idea is quite interesting, back in time plus RPG aspects added, zombies are cool, too, but that would be it... The Story feels as if the author is 12 years old and has little to no experience how the word works. 15 year olds driving cars, spending money like crazy while owning a multi million dollar business... Sure, sounds good, doesn't work. Then the family is allowed polygamy by the government, as it seems with minors as well... Don't forget slavery... Oh no, I mean maids and butlers... And the pace... Way to fast, no real character development possible... And don't forget the minor, who is legally drinking with a female police officer, which then proceeds to seduce said minor... Sigh And the "erotic scenes" are like "... And we had *** all night." sensational. I do not recommend this story, setting is interesting, but the author totally failed in writing a good story.
This is sadness. The story is littered with misspellings and poor grammar, and the only interesting part of it is the information on the zombie and mutant levels. When a story is rushed like this, it hurts to read. The MC is a dickhead, specifically to his stepsister. The MC has a harem. Meta of cultivation novels, and really fucking annoying. The MC has a system/external help. Meta of cultivation novels, and really fucking annoying. The MC dies and goes back in time, before the crises begins, giving MC time to prepare. Meta of cultivation novels, and kinda annoying. Cultivation novels have a meta because these things are the easiest way to give a MC power and success, instead of writing a character who's smart and successful on his own. I would say that the MC is what the author dreams to be, and so of course the author gave him money, a harem, and a way to be more powerful than others. What the author doesn't realize is that he will never be successful in the ways he wants because he's busy writing up ****ty power fantasies on the internet. After rereading this review I've realized that like the MC, I too am a dickhead, but at least I wouldn't abuse a family member who has done nothing to me, just because of the actions, of an entirely different family member. Good job author, the only thing you've managed to do is make me self reflect. But I do that all the time anyway, so really, you haven't done anything good.
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