Review Detail of GERNero in The Zombie System

Oh boy, this story is all over the place... First, the idea is quite interesting, back in time plus RPG aspects added, zombies are cool, too, but that would be it... The Story feels as if the author is 12 years old and has little to no experience how the word works. 15 year olds driving cars, spending money like crazy while owning a multi million dollar business... Sure, sounds good, doesn't work. Then the family is allowed polygamy by the government, as it seems with minors as well... Don't forget slavery... Oh no, I mean maids and butlers... And the pace... Way to fast, no real character development possible... And don't forget the minor, who is legally drinking with a female police officer, which then proceeds to seduce said minor... Sigh And the "erotic scenes" are like "... And we had *** all night." sensational. I do not recommend this story, setting is interesting, but the author totally failed in writing a good story.