Review Detail of Supreme_Leader in The Zombie System
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Thanks god there are no long *** secnes. Describing the two *** scenes in details would fill up the whole chapter or more. If i wanted to read *** scenes i would read erotic novels instead. You could add a few *** scenes as they attract more people but I suggest you should keep them minimum and focus on the story as you're doing. I also like the fact that you describe the girls and their 'beauty' in short sentences or words instead of writing jade like beautiful etc just to make up work count. Loyalty and undying love and accepting other girls easily is fine and all but I hope the girls don't totally become mindless pupets without any character. Anyway I really like this type of novels and your novel is interesting. So I hope you keep them chapters coming and don't drop it. I will vote for it. đ
The Zombie System
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+1 Hate mindless beauty that love the mc for no apparent reason other than he is nice(even if the mc is disgustingly creepy like most japs wish fulfilment neet mc) even if he ignore them(chinese mc, cultivate for yearsss without even a squeak and da girl is mibdleessly wait for him to settle his business for around 400 chap before care for her abit, then cultivate agaaaiinn for hundreds of year, it keeps get longer and longer but the heroine stay loyal with undying love... Like zombie love brainsss and follow liive brains for no apparent reason and get into heat when saw one.) or having other woMan tell them he like them both, then another then another.... Bahh im too lazy to list it moree.. Sorry for ranting, it must be the weather gets me..(some more girly excuses) bla bla... Good novel btw, hasnt encountered bad cliche, like mentioned above. Cliche is unavoidable, it is trending.. Just dont be too weird. Just a bit >...<