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The concept of the book is definitely amazing. The contrasting characters keep you hooked till the last, I assure you. The reference to the golden cage in the synopsis made me remember something interesting but let's see where this book takes that. The only suggestion I wanted to put forward is you need to work on grammar a little bit. Regardless, everything is perfect like you!
The story of this novel is really good and its completely original. The author had good grasp over narration of the story. The characters portrayed by the the author seems completely realistic, their interactions are very lifelike. And the main character is pragmatic and down to earth. Hope that the author will continue this good work.
You can tell by the first chapter that the author has a story to tell. The author has a message to convey he/she would like the readets to understand, to feel, and to experience for themselves. By the first chapter you can already feel the suffocation, the feeling that something dark is looming ahead but will there be light? I don't know. The characters too are mysterious and hidden, their experiences somehow secretly affecting the road ahead. Which makes the reader curious what will happen... Regarding grammar, the author has lots of room to improve, but aren't we all? Sometimes, when we read books, we only see the better part of it. We never see the gruelling years of trial and error, and mistakes made and successes buried under heaps of doubts and hesitation, behind an absolute refined work of literature. These "dark times" are all integral part of a good writer--hence a good writer is a writer from the ashes. The refinement that a writer reaches does not happen immediately, but only through hard work and determination to create.
Story about a novelist lady who's trying to get her life back on track while keeping her family safe from her ex-husband who just refuses to leave her alone. There are a lot of interesting ideas in here and the author is telling the story in a very poetic way. My major problem is that sometimes things feel like they happen a bit too fast. There is a lot of cuts between present time and past time as if two stories were being told at the same time, on top of the plot constantly being shifted from point of view to point of view. Added with the slightly unpolished grammar, and sometimes it can be really hard to follow the story. The cast of characters seems likable enough for the main characters while the antagonists at times feel like they're evil just for the sake of being evil. I think Aleena is a cool character and I do want to see her come out on top out of her problem. I just wish the plot had a bit more focus and slowed down a little bit.
Normally, I don't read romance novels but that hint of horror in there just wooed me into reading it and I'm not disappointed. Hehe, I might just start reading romance novels because of this. Even though the grammar's a bit odd, I'm gonna stick with it. Waiting for more chapters. Keep up the good work author.
Hey, Miyukii its the guy that promises to give you a review in Tuesday but couldn't because I was grounded. Alright lets get it going. Also this review is my personal opinion so take it with a grain of salt. The story shifts from another persons perspective to another. It was confusing at first. From getting up to be married to a book interview to a prince simping over Aleena which I think I got it right? There are so many girls with the "Lena" name its as if you really like this name ;) As for world building, it's pretty much your typical royal blood arrange marriage theme. It's usually not my thing but it certainly has a kicker to the drama. As for writing quality, its kinda good but the grammar could use a bit of polishing as it sorta ruins the reading experience. A little pro tip: I always tell this to other Authors by try using fancy words that can be immersive to the reader. Take for example: "A detritus pile of dung is everywhere at the avenues of New York." While also giving them a clear description. I am not an expert but I thought it could help a fellow author. Anyway, its a good romance with a hunky mean jerk that has good abs (thumbs up to that). And with an insecure girl running away from this prince. And I think I am done.
