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the_demon_lord3yrCommentedhahahahaha ohio
" .. STOP … DON'T TAKE IT AWAY… IT'S DANGEROUS … YOU DON'T KNOW WHAT IT'S CAPABLE OF "- the_demon_lord3yrCommented
sigh lets start
The Choice - the_demon_lord3yrCommented
good how someone not in his mind way of thinking
This chapter has been deleted. - the_demon_lord3yrReplied to the_demon_lord
ahim, bandam is me and i change me many times ok? i shall delete the comments in time
This chapter has been deleted. - the_demon_lord3yrReplied to Lovely_kidCh 1 when it all started
- the_demon_lord3yrCommented
you can add asound effect
I scream an ear-piercing scream that you are lucky not to have heard, and then I glance around. - the_demon_lord3yrCommented
grammer ahim
'no, no, this cant happened. Dad cant dies, brother where is he? Is he okay?' - the_demon_lord3yrCommented
why the elves entry?
A hybrid of fairy and human is what I must be, even though I am the daughter to two purely dominant elves/fairies. - the_demon_lord3yrCommented
strong words many of your readers are not English professionals
I don't know "what" I am. I possess the allure of a fairy, as well as the comeliness of one, except when one looks from the view of superstition; I am nothing but a haggard anthropoid. - the_demon_lord3yrCommented
why? (some questions I ask or some things I point out, sometimes are not for any good reason so not everything I saw is a mistake) ( this is if I could ever pinpoint a mistake)
Our relationship with mortals is in disguise; we coexist without their awareness. If they find us, they will burn us. - the_demon_lord3yrCommented
1) sudden apperenss of mortals when we are not talking about them 2) a new concept but it is undefined 3) hard not regular words which made the feeling that humans(i am assuming you meant this not mortal) feel not apparent but hidden
Those beings termed mortals have short lives. They face ideal incidents in addition to unpleasant ones along the way, but even so, they still cherish their lives to the fullest and savor it. - the_demon_lord3yrCommented
2) here it is not apparent who are the ones that {they still do} it appears that the king and his bro, not the people (remember delete all the comments)
They still do, but their love for me is never-ending and always blocks what others say. - the_demon_lord3yrCommented
1) any creature here you should use in the story or change them into ones that you will use
There are myriad of races that rule this world, such as: elves, dwarves, orcs, goblins, and fairies. Various beasts are also a part of these races. They, however, mature solely after cultivating high-levels in the magic realm. - the_demon_lord3yrCommented
I will write some comments here and there please delete them auther, ok?
Arziella, a world where weakness is recognized as a curse, and only strength are acknowledged. In this world, magic is everything, and without it, a creature's life is considered futile. - the_demon_lord3yrCommentedCh 39 sleeping?