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Story about a novelist lady who's trying to get her life back on track while keeping her family safe from her ex-husband who just refuses to leave her alone. There are a lot of interesting ideas in here and the author is telling the story in a very poetic way. My major problem is that sometimes things feel like they happen a bit too fast. There is a lot of cuts between present time and past time as if two stories were being told at the same time, on top of the plot constantly being shifted from point of view to point of view. Added with the slightly unpolished grammar, and sometimes it can be really hard to follow the story. The cast of characters seems likable enough for the main characters while the antagonists at times feel like they're evil just for the sake of being evil. I think Aleena is a cool character and I do want to see her come out on top out of her problem. I just wish the plot had a bit more focus and slowed down a little bit.