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You can tell by the first chapter that the author has a story to tell. The author has a message to convey he/she would like the readets to understand, to feel, and to experience for themselves. By the first chapter you can already feel the suffocation, the feeling that something dark is looming ahead but will there be light? I don't know. The characters too are mysterious and hidden, their experiences somehow secretly affecting the road ahead. Which makes the reader curious what will happen... Regarding grammar, the author has lots of room to improve, but aren't we all? Sometimes, when we read books, we only see the better part of it. We never see the gruelling years of trial and error, and mistakes made and successes buried under heaps of doubts and hesitation, behind an absolute refined work of literature. These "dark times" are all integral part of a good writer--hence a good writer is a writer from the ashes. The refinement that a writer reaches does not happen immediately, but only through hard work and determination to create.