DDDylan
The story is phenomenal, the characters are intriguing, the updates are regular, and the grammar is good. The writing format could use a bit of work. Mainly because the quotation system seems to be inconsistent. It's actually similar to the quotation system I use, but I found a way to make mine more consistent in one of my stories. Normally, the only thing I would say about your description is that it's great but you never describe how people look. I'll let you off the hook with that this time because you use description in several other ways that other authors don't. The description in general is excellent and you even describe how the environment looks. Feel free to look at "Avatar: Macai's Journey" if you'd like. It's one of my stories, I have a similar style to you in certain ways.
There are spaces for the grammar improvement, but the setting seems grand and interesting. I am touched by the romance, love and trust between Joyce and Alex. Alex is kind like a perfect boyfriend and partner. This novel is not a cliche billionaire or CEO or Mafia boss plotting. It is a proper well elaborated novel based on magic background. Although Joyce indeed is a prince, but the novel is more about Joyce's self-grow, training, and adventures with his knight. Keep up writer, [img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]