Review Detail of Brian_Hanes_117 in [BL] Priest and his guardian knights

The story is phenomenal, the characters are intriguing, the updates are regular, and the grammar is good. The writing format could use a bit of work. Mainly because the quotation system seems to be inconsistent. It's actually similar to the quotation system I use, but I found a way to make mine more consistent in one of my stories. Normally, the only thing I would say about your description is that it's great but you never describe how people look. I'll let you off the hook with that this time because you use description in several other ways that other authors don't. The description in general is excellent and you even describe how the environment looks. Feel free to look at "Avatar: Macai's Journey" if you'd like. It's one of my stories, I have a similar style to you in certain ways.