BrightBrain256
We always see ordinary because we don't take an extra mile to se extra ordinary. ~brightbrainsug~
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<[ Turn Evil! little girl!]>
<[ INITIATING KILL MODE >
<[ Danger Alert! Save your power stones!]>
ಥ‿ಥ object i guess
The story is fine and promising except for a few mistakes in grammar. I would recommend Grammarly for that since none of us is perfect. The book is worth a try and highly recommended. Keep it up author, you will surely make it.
*he thought to himself...
There is a sudden change in emotions that's abit ironic
Some controversy is plot setting
*only to find out...