yohan26_
My ghad! This book is a masterpiece. I just read the whole 12 chapters and I am telling you, it is so goooooood! KYAAAAAAAHHHH!!!! Okay, hold on. WQ: 4/5 A little bit of editing on the grammar and the shifting tenses. SoU: 5/5 12 chapters in one publishing, how much more do we need? SD: 5/5 Intense. Everything about the chapters are intense. The fight scenes and the confrontations. Seriously, tho.. the Author captured it all. CD: 5/5 I love the characters so much. Like the author clearly made sure that everything is relatable and the emotions of the characters are being shown with perfection. WB: 5/5 Vampires and humans, normal schtick. But goodness, really. Words are not enough to describe how good this book is. Overall: 4.8/5 The book is great. The author captured it all. The show and tell is perfection. Everything about this book is a masterpiece.
This novel has managed to hook me from the different quirks of the Characters. The Author did a great job fleshing them out in the early chapters, and there's not too much info dump. It didn't feel laborious to read at all, because the Author clearly mastered the art of pacing. What stood out from this book for me was the potential relationship between Knox and the MC :)
So I will leave a review here. First of all, even though I have only read the four chaps, but the beginning were portrayed vividly and you can feel the effort of the author to pull out the beginning. Furthermore the pace was so good that you didn't even notice that you finished the chapters. The character design was displayed with only a dialogue, and the author didn't even need to explain their personality which I find the author impressive. The world background - I still don't know yet since the characters was still introduce first, but the narration of the surroundings of a given character, you could already expect what world they live in. That's all, I guess? Good luck and keep it up, Author! PS: I have to write so I can only read the first four chaps hehehhehee
This author has written yet another intriguing and amazing story! The first chapter had me hooked. I was really impressed with your writing style; it was simple and easy to understand; you really nailed it! I admired this author because she was consistent in her writing career. Keep it up, and best of luck.