GoddessKarma
I'm very random and love comedy. If you see something in my stories that I need to improve then please feel free to tell me, I appreciate and accept all criticisms. My discord: GoddessKarma#2831
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GoddessKarma11mthCommentedCh 1 A Chance Meeting- GoddessKarma11mthCommentedCh 1 A Chance Meeting
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- GoddessKarma11mthReplied to MichelleDalton8310Ch 35 Back to Business
- GoddessKarma11mthReplied to TheLastRemnants
lol you should re-watch
Alaric's hands folded over one another while he shifted his gaze back towards the window, the reflection blurred and contorted by the beads of rain trailing down the glass. - GoddessKarma11mthReplied to TheLastRemnants
legacies lol
Alaric's hands folded over one another while he shifted his gaze back towards the window, the reflection blurred and contorted by the beads of rain trailing down the glass. - GoddessKarma11mthCommented
every time I see the name Alaric, I immediately picture Alaric Saltzman XD
Alaric's hands folded over one another while he shifted his gaze back towards the window, the reflection blurred and contorted by the beads of rain trailing down the glass. - GoddessKarma11mthCommented
this
"N-No, I can help." - GoddessKarma11mthCommented
(¬_¬)
"I am not lying!" Chris tried to defend herself, but, as usual, his white lie was caught easily. - GoddessKarma11mthReplied to H3R0Y
I took your words into consideration and made some improvements but I can't explain what I did without spoiling future chapters 🤣 if you'd like to hear and discuss it then feel free to add me on discord GoddessKarma#2831 so we can chat more about this. I want to say thank you again for pointing this out and letting me know where I need to improve. I always appreciate genuine criticism
Ch 11 You are... NOT the Daughter - GoddessKarma1yrPosted
I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You're wondering why you're still reading this 8. You saw that mistake.... Right? (on 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said saw you, not you saw 13. I also skipped 1 14. You got tricked 15. I'm wasting your time... NOW GO AND READ THE STORY! You're missing out!
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- GoddessKarma1yrCommented
Sophy, capitalize the man's name please
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we love sus ,it's okay
"Where were you? Why did you take off by yourself like that without a word?! Are you okay? Did anything happen?? Why the hell did you leave without at least waking me?! That's it, forget it! Our little deal is off!" He huffs angrily.