story critique example

After reading many webnovels, it became apparent to me that there was an urgent need for a definitive discourse on the judgment of webnovels. I have observed far too much degeneracy and baseless opinions voiced by flat-headed, insipid, nauseating, illiterate charlatans over the internet. Beyond my desire to counteract negative influences, this book will serve as the review guide to any web novel reader. It is my complete intention to derive the principles and judgments in this book from the ground up, so that any sensible being will be obligated to believe in it, or otherwise be deemed foolish.

This is not a story about exotic foods. Nor does it try to tell an epic tale. This is a story about a ill-fated reporter whose luck shifted for worse, when he was transferred from lifestyle department to foreign affairs department. CoverPage credits goes to ArkaneStudios(Prey)... I don't own the rights to this cover and will remove it instantly if the artist wishes so.

Humanity rebuilt the Tower of Babel, and God abandoned mankind — but there is one who seeks to rewrite his destined fate.

Crime to crime is about the mc trying to find his place in this world. He has many interesting adventures in the chapters to come

Alex Nix is brutally killed, but apon returning to consciousness he is alarmed to be told by the Goddess of Love, Lucy that he has been judged unworthy of reincarnnation. The only way to earn it is to become an Apostle, someone who visits many worlds to help overcome whatever Crisis may befall them, or they are sent to kill rouge Apostles who may be causing critical issues.

There was a girl who lived well, happy and rich, but on the night of her birthday, her parents died. When she was six years old she found out someone had killed her parents, her uncle was taking care of her. He is his father’s brother, when she was eight years old she auditioned at SZCQ Grobal Entertainment Agency or known as SZE, his uncle was the owner of Entertainment Agency. SZE is an Entertainment Agency with secret missions, it is made for those in need of justice, who are unwilling or ignored by the authorities or superiors. P.S Names, characters, places, and events may be the work of the author's imagination or mere fiction. Any resemblance to actual events or local or human, living or dead, is purely coincidental. PLAGIARISM is a CRIME!

Tired of her stressful life in States, Jeacelle decided to go back to her grandparent's hometown to start anew. Little did she know, going back there will turn her world upside down upon meeting a weird guy in the cafe who happens to be a link to the missing piece of her life.

Before marrying Silas, Joyce had only met him three times. A marriage of convenience, a secret agreement, for a term of three years. She's fresh off a heartbreak — the man she chased for years told her they "weren't a good match." Silas has his own baggage: rumor says he's still hung up on a white moonlight who happens to look just like Joyce. So that's all she is. A substitute. ** In the second year of their marriage, on Joyce's birthday, she drank too much and, in front of everyone, tugged on his tie, pinning him underneath her: "You look... a lot like my husband." The Thorne family's second master, known for being rational and unfeeling, was flustered by her that night. He leaned in close to her ear and coaxed in a low voice, "Be good." The next day Joyce woke up to find her lips were swollen. This… Who did this! When she went to question him, she discovered Silas's lip was bitten. He stared at her and said slowly, "You crossed the line first." ** The scandal leaked. At a party, her ex-boyfriend stepped in: "She's mine. Who dares talk?" Then Silas walked in. The room went silent. "Yours? Since when?" "Joyce, tell me. Whose are you?" So much for the secret marriage. So much for being a substitute. This was supposed to be fake… wasn't it?

Fu Xiaoxiao transmigrates into a book and immediately faces the crisis of being sent to the countryside. As the unloved middle child, her younger sister is the one meant to go — but her mother transfers her job to the sister instead. A disaster of a start. To avoid being sent away, she has to marry within seven days. She meets a few ordinary men and decides she'd rather go to the countryside. Then she runs into a neighbor who's also looking for a spouse — and his conditions are surprisingly good. A dowry of three hundred? Bicycles and a radio? Just take care of the kids, and separate rooms are fine? The others may pass, but she won't. Every day is a battle of wits with the two kids. Life is eventful, she gets a salary every month, and the boss is never home. Absolutely perfect. Except... wasn't this big shot supposed to be infertile? Then why does he keep strutting around naked in front of her? She has professional ethics. She won't be seduced by a good body. Hmph. Men only slow down her sword swing. Lu Feng grits his teeth at Fu Xiaoxiao, who remains completely unmoved by his countless attempts to seduce her, and traps her in his arms. "Boss, let's talk this through. I know forty a month is a bit much — how about... five less?" Trapped in his embrace, Fu Xiaoxiao thinks he's unhappy with her high salary and starts bargaining. "I'm giving myself to you for free." Lu Feng grinds out through clenched teeth. This woman has no heart. "...Can I say no?" Fu Xiaoxiao swallows, staring at the washboard abs so close. "Such a good deal — are you sure you don't want it?" Lu Feng squints, tempting her. "Fine." A fool turns down a bargain.

Feng Qing, a top surgeon from the 21st century, wakes up in a body no one wants — married off to Rong Ling, the most powerful Regent in Dayan, a man who makes it abundantly clear: "Do you think you're worthy of marrying this king? Foolish." While he keeps his distance, she keeps herself busy, saving lives with medical knowledge centuries ahead of its time, collecting debts from those who wronged the original body's owner, and planning her exit strategy. Later, he became the New Emperor— "Qing Qing, from now on, you are my Empress." "Not interested."