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【Double C1V1】A certain gossip magazine exposed that the newly crowned actress Mu Yan spent the night at the villa of a certain already-married business mogul, accusing her of being a mistress intruding into someone else's family. Mu Yan posted on Weibo, "I went back to my own home, what business is it of yours?" Young Master Jiang from the Jiang Family, known for his immense power and noble grace in Upper City, reposted the Weibo, causing a city-wide uproar. At home, Mu Yan looked at the man beside her who kept refreshing her Weibo on her phone. "Since when did you learn to direct and act all by yourself?" The man was displeased, "You won't acknowledge me, and you won't let me fight for it myself?" Mu Yan, "..." She really couldn't tell who had been the domineering one forcing her to sign the marriage papers back then. If love were a poison, when he first met her, he was already poisoned to the core, with only her being the antidote. A secret love story in the entertainment industry.

Love is monopolies, is madness, is bigotry "Please let me go." "You are mine, I will never let you go." "Go to hell, I hate you." "If I have to go to hell, you have to come down with me."

Chen Du, 28, inherits a traditional paper craftsman's shop from his missing master. When the paper figures in his shop begin to move—when the dead refuse to stay buried—he discovers he is the last Soul Walker: a practitioner who guides lost souls to peace using ancient paper crafts. But Paper Soul Hall, an organization that trades in human souls, wants him dead. And his own master's soul is trapped inside a paper figure in his shop, waiting to be saved.

When struggling baker Serena Blake meets billionaire Elias Moreau, she’s shocked by his blunt offer: a one-year contract marriage in exchange for half a million dollars. For Elias, it’s the only way to secure his inheritance. For Serena, it’s a lifeline to save her family’s failing bakery. What begins as a cold business arrangement soon turns into a dangerous game of emotions, where blurred lines, hidden pasts, and unexpected passion threaten to rewrite the rules of their deal—and their hearts.

Tragedy can strike anywhere and at any moment, to anyone. In a moment life can change. It can leave you so drastically altered as to leave you with permanent scars. Meet Jaxsen Michaels and Sebastian Green. A parentless child and a fatherless son each get a chance to have the family that was lost to them both as they get to know one another and help each other past the darkness of each of their pasts with love and patience. This is book one of three.

Amira never believed love could be signed on paper — until she became Leonardo Rossi’s wife. The contract was clear: no emotions, no questions, no future. But living under the same roof as the cold, enigmatic CEO turns every rule into a fragile thread waiting to break. Behind Leonardo’s flawless control lies a man haunted by loss, secrets, and a past that refuses to die. And behind Amira’s quiet obedience burns a fire she can no longer hide. When the truth about his late wife begins to unravel, Amira finds herself torn between the man she loves and the shadows that could destroy them both. In a world built on power, money, and lies — one forbidden kiss can ruin everything. Because this time, the contract wasn’t the trap… love was.

Ming Yuan discovered an abandoned Qin dynasty mansion beside Floral Palace River after his great accident in the way to home. He separated from his daughter, Molly, lost inside the dark and demonic evil mansion. He should find Molly by answering some quests around the mansion and also the deathly impact chased him. He must teleport to some era to get the answer for the deadly questions and also the evil spirits surrounded him. What happen then to the fate of Ming Yuan? Can he solve the puzzle game so fast and find his daughter? What's wrong with the mansion abandoned there? Happy Reading!

“Last time I saw her was in the afternoon of 29th of March last year. She said she was waiting for someone and I asked her who it was, but she said it's none of my business. After that day, I'd never seen her again, and it was also the same day that Irene Bayer disappeared without even a trace. I don't want to think or assumed that Bently is the suspect of Irene's disappearance, but it somehow connected with the day that the both of them was declared missing” - Jane Ruby

Iris is a young woman living in a cruel house where experiments are preformed on people for science. Find yourself in her mind and see life through her eyes as she grows more and more unhappy with the cards she’s been dealt.

Sophie Wexler transmigrated into a novel about The Galaxy, becoming the vicious, F-rank Healer-class cannon fodder. The original owner constantly caused trouble and made things difficult for the female lead, earning her the hatred of the entire internet. Upon transmigrating and seeing that everything had been ruined by the original owner, Sophie's only thought was: "What kind of nightmare start is this?!" To escape the original owner's fate, Sophie Wexler worked diligently, conducted herself conscientiously, stayed away from the male and female leads, compensated the soldiers harmed by the original owner, and strove to be a model citizen of The Galaxy, absolutely refusing to be the cannon fodder 'offed' by the Imperial Marshal! Broke and powerless, Sophie also had to support a man who'd been innocently dragged into the original owner's mess. She had no choice but to hustle. She started live streaming, became a masked singer, and held concerts. At first, netizens were scornful: 【Tsk, how good can she possibly sound?】 Later, the netizens were forced to eat their words. 【Damn, that's so good I'm on my knees!】 【What the hell, the violent episode of my Disorder Period has actually been soothed?!】 【The toxins in my Spiritual Sea have actually been eliminated!】 Her live streams went viral, the masked singer became a huge sensation, and tickets for her concerts were snapped up across The Galaxy. Sophie was content, thinking, "This time, I must have finally escaped the original owner's fate, right?" But what do you know, the man I've been doting on and supporting is actually the Imperial Marshal?! --- One day, Yancey Forrest came home to find that the boisterous person who was always claiming to be good to him was gone. His eyes darkened. Provoke me and then think you can leave? After catching her, Yancey traced his fingertips along Sophie's neck, smiling gently. "Why run?" Sophie trembled. "You... you're the Imperial Marshal?" His identity exposed, Yancey Forrest took her hand and slowly placed it on his own neck ring. "You know I won't kill you, don't you?"