critique circle online writing workshop

Sequel to Lord of Mysteries

ณ หมู่บ้านชนบทอันแสงห่างไกลนามว่า กอร์ตู ลูเมี่ยน·ลี เด็กหนุ่มสุดกวนผู้มีนิสัยชอบแต่งเรื่องแกล้งอำคน อาศัยอยู่กับพี่สาวผู้รอบรู้ต่างสายเลือด โอลัวร์·ลี วันหนึ่ง ลูเมี่ยน·ลีถูกสุภาพสตรีปริศนาทักถึงฝันประหลาดที่เขากำลังประสบ ซ้ำยังเสนอให้จั่วไพ่ทาโรต์โดยไม่บอกเหตุผล และเขาก็ได้ไพ่ ‘เจ็ดไม้’ มาครอบครอง ทว่านั่นคือจุดเริ่มต้นของความฝันอันผิดแผกพิสดารยิ่งกว่าเดิม ในขณะเดียวกันลูเมี่ยน ลีก็ได้รู้ความจริงจากกลุ่มคนต่างถิ่นว่า พวกเขาได้รับจดหมายขอความช่วยเหลือจากบุคคลนิรนามในหมู่บ้าน เนื้อหาของจดหมายมีเพียงสองบรรทัด เป็นเขียนโดยการตัดคำจากหนังสือปฏิทินมาเรียงกัน ที่พวกเขามาเยือน ณ หมู่บ้านแห่งนี้ก็เพื่อตามหาเจ้าของจดหมาย แต่หลังจากสืบเสาะไปได้สักพัก ลูเมี่ยน·ลีกลับค้นพบว่า หนังสือปฏิทินประจำบ้านของตนมีร่องรอยการเจาะคำออกไปบางส่วน และเมื่อนำคำที่หายไปมาเรียงกันจะได้ใจความว่า “เราต้องการความช่วยเหลือโดยด่วน ผู้คนรอบข้างเริ่มทำตัวแปลกเข้าไปทุกที” *** ลิขสิทธิ์ถูกต้องภายใต้บริษัท Ink Stone Entertainment *** ได้รับลิขสิทธิ์ออนไลน์ (Digital license) สำหรับแปลขายลงบนเว็บไซต์ได้อย่างถูกลิขสิทธิ์ 100% เจ้าของลิขสิทธิ์ต้นฉบับ : China Literature เรื่อง : ราชันเร้นลับ 2 : วัฏจักรแห่งชะตา (Circle of Inevitability) ผู้เขียน : อ้ายเฉียนสุ่ยเตออูเจ๋ย ผู้แปล : BJK ภาพปก : Nara.itz --- [宿命之环] / [爱潜水的乌贼] ©2024 Ink Stone Entertainment Co., Ltd. All rights reserved. Thai translation rights arranged with China Literature by Ink Stone Entertainment Co., Ltd.

Luo Ning, a cannon fodder female supporting character in a celebrity circle's group pet novel, gets a rerun of life—this time she refuses to be the cannon fodder! Haters clamor: "Luo Ning is just a vase, bad at singing, dancing, and acting; always riding on top celebrities' coattails to generate heat, first-class in everything but talent except for her looks." Later, when Luo Ning who excels in singing and dancing, skilled in musical instruments, chess, calligraphy, and painting, survival skills, gourmet cooking, and also proficient in drawing talismans and fortune-telling appears before the public—extremely beautiful, highly intelligent, and with explosive acting skills. Haters are convinced: "Sister, I can do it!!!" Suddenly, one day a bombshell hits social media. A photo of the mysterious film emperor Lu Xun kissing Luo Ning's cheek surfaces, igniting a whirlwind of scandals across major headlines. Fans and onlookers do not believe it, "Impossible! The photo must be positioned in a misleading way, Luo Ning wants to cling to the film emperor for hype again, shamelessly chasing for popularity and traffic!" Before Luo Ning could respond, the usually low-key Lu Xun clarifies first. @LuXunV: The photo wasn't positioned misleadingly; the shameless one is me! Following this, everyone witnesses the film emperor changing styles daily on social media, showing off his love; either showcasing the cuisine made by Luo Ning or her beautiful photographs. Fans and the public are stunned, never expecting such a demeanor from the film emperor...

Reborn in the United States in 1995, with all the web novels he has read in his head. Let's see how he uses online literature to skew America's bestseller rankings and become a popular cultural master like Stan Lee. In the 20th century, what is the largest IP in Hollywood? It's comics and web novels! Netflix? It's nothing without online literature! Disney's CEO later claims.

Petra pindah ke kota demi beasiswa dari SMA Metropol. Itulah yang membawa Petra bertemu Lyon. Pemuda dingin yang kaya raya. Seolah tidak cukup atas nama takdir membawa Petra dalam sebuah kontrak seumur hidup dengan Lyon sebagai calon istri masa depan Lyon! Lalu, bisakah perjanjian antara Lyon dan Petra berakhir mulus? ---

A steam punk fantasy. Previously, it was called Reincarnated as a Supernatural Horror Entity. Jack, a content creator for mystery, horror, and conspiracy stories, died and was reborn as a formless ghost. He acquired the system-panel like ability to get stronger. He could earn new supernatural traits. And he could even evolve and gain new incarnations. The problem was... he was now in an alternate Earth. The one that was still in the Industrial Revolution Era. The one with cursed steam engines, monster-infested sea exploration, mysterious pirates, supernatural powers, mythical creatures, demonic entities, and completely different geography. Jack had to adapt and survive. Thus, the legends of the Circle of Jacks appeared in that world. Transcendent incarnations of Jack made their impacts in this new world... (1) Jack Mystery, the mysterious specter, (2) Judge Jack, the rakshasa of judgement, (3) Jack Night, the human mercenary, (4) Racer Jack, the kamaitachi speedster vigilante, and (5) Jack Lantern, the devil puppet who decided to be a bizarre puppeteer. I will also be posting this story on RoyalRoad.com: https://www.royalroad.com/profile/36721/fictions If you, dear readers, enjoy the story and are willing to support my work, please visit patreon.com/Alkrishna. It should be about 30 chapters ahead there.

Su Yan always wanted to be an author. Being moved by his determination (Well, in fact, she was just an avid reader of his fan-fictions and wanted him to write full time …) official Shen Lu grants the aspiring author a system: The Lovely Writing System! Finding a strange app on his beloved notebook, Su Yan is sure he has fallen prey to a hacker. But why is this strange app issuing tasks related to his favorite hobby? Wait … What? He is supposed to write BL?! And what is this shitty task about experiencing story immersion?! No! He’d rather not become an author if that means he also has to become a shou! Follow Su Yan on his path to becoming the world’s greatest BL author … and to reluctantly becoming a beloved shou thanks to a shitty Lovely Writing System! Release schedule: The story is finished.

After transmigrating into a fantasy world, Chu Ge finally awakens a system at the age of eighteen. But the name of the system nearly makes him break down: The Villain Diary Check-In Sign-In System. What kind of ridiculous patchwork system is this? Day 1: Spirit Body reward. Day 7: King Body reward. Day 30: Saint Body reward. As Chu Ge keeps writing his daily diary, the world around him quietly begins to change. Destiny’s chosen sons rise one after another, while breathtaking female immortals start gathering around him. Years later, standing at the peak, facing countless protagonists and surrounded by peerless beauties, Chu Ge can only shout in despair: “System, you’ve completely misunderstood me! I really am not a Cao thief!” ============ Translation Disclaimer: I do not own the rights to this novel. I am solely responsible for the translation efforts. If you like the novel, please help me by giving a review and power stones. This series is currently being hosted on fenrirealm site.

“Let’s burn this world to the ground and descend to the underworld together.” There’s more to high society than the glam and riches showed on television and magazines. If you open your eyes, you’ll see the truth of the world. There have been others among you who you believed were fiction. ... Helen Reed, known to many for her bold statements and strong personality, is an upcoming entrepreneur, ready to create her own empire in Harlow city. Eli King, known to many as ice king, is an investor and business tycoon. Born into a society filled with riches, he practically had the world in his hands. But he carried a secret from the world outside the society he was born into. A secret that stained their mouths with blood. ... Helen is thrown into the spotlight of high society and must try her best to eliminate each factor trying to break up her and Eli. Being with Eli meant Helen now had to face the pressure, judgment, and even threats from high society. Soon enough, she’ll learn high society is filled with many secrets. Could she survive, or do they underestimate her? The cover was done by sdohshidesigner on instagram

Fu Xiaoxiao transmigrates into a book and immediately faces the crisis of being sent to the countryside. As the unloved middle child, her younger sister is the one meant to go — but her mother transfers her job to the sister instead. A disaster of a start. To avoid being sent away, she has to marry within seven days. She meets a few ordinary men and decides she'd rather go to the countryside. Then she runs into a neighbor who's also looking for a spouse — and his conditions are surprisingly good. A dowry of three hundred? Bicycles and a radio? Just take care of the kids, and separate rooms are fine? The others may pass, but she won't. Every day is a battle of wits with the two kids. Life is eventful, she gets a salary every month, and the boss is never home. Absolutely perfect. Except... wasn't this big shot supposed to be infertile? Then why does he keep strutting around naked in front of her? She has professional ethics. She won't be seduced by a good body. Hmph. Men only slow down her sword swing. Lu Feng grits his teeth at Fu Xiaoxiao, who remains completely unmoved by his countless attempts to seduce her, and traps her in his arms. "Boss, let's talk this through. I know forty a month is a bit much — how about... five less?" Trapped in his embrace, Fu Xiaoxiao thinks he's unhappy with her high salary and starts bargaining. "I'm giving myself to you for free." Lu Feng grinds out through clenched teeth. This woman has no heart. "...Can I say no?" Fu Xiaoxiao swallows, staring at the washboard abs so close. "Such a good deal — are you sure you don't want it?" Lu Feng squints, tempting her. "Fine." A fool turns down a bargain.