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active or passive voice in a short story

active or passive voice in a short story

Pampered by Short-Lived Bigshot

Pampered by Short-Lived Bigshot

When they first met, Tang Wan sighed, “The fifth young master of the Jiang family is just as the rumors said. He’s celibate, aloof, prideful, and is a man to be revered. Unfortunately, he’s so smart that he no longer has any will to live, which made him sickly, and he’s going to die soon… Later on, the fifth young master brought her into his room. When she came out, everyone stared at her in shock. Why was she crying? …… Later on, it was said that the fifth young master returned after he recovered from his illness, and he brought a girl back. She appeared pure and harmless, but underneath that harmless appearance, she was actually a spitfire that offended quite a number of people. But the fifth young master just said, “I brought her back, so I’ll let her do whatever she wants. If… anything happens, I’ll take responsibility.” His best friend gave him a reminder. “You’re going to be responsible for someone from the Tang family?” “Since she came back with me, she’s mine. She’s just a young girl and is spoilt. I have to take responsibility.” After Tang Wan married into the Jiang family, she only had one mission. She must give birth to his children before he died! Meanwhile, the fifth young master was puzzled. “You’re a gentle and shy girl during the day, so why are you so different during the night?” Tang Wan thought. ‘I have to make every second count. He won’t be able to live long.’ After she gave birth to his son and he became one year old, Tang Wan was prepared to become a widow. However… ‘Why isn’t he dead yet?’ Much later, the fifth master of the Jiang family asked her, “I heard that you’ve been looking for my death every day. Do you want to kill me by sucking me dry?”
General
1381 Chs
[BL] CRAVING HIM: Addicted to His Voice

[BL] CRAVING HIM: Addicted to His Voice

They say the body has memory. I didn’t believe that until I started waking up soaked in sweat and c*m, my heart racing, my fingers trembling, my lips parted as if I’d been whispering his name in sleep. But I never even knew his real name. I remember his voice though, how it curled around me like smoke, soft and deep, commanding yet kind, dark and dangerous. He never touched me. Never laid a hand on me. But I came so hard, I cried. Now, every night, I crave it. That voice. That whisper that made my knees weak. That sin I never thought I’d want. I thought I was straight. Now, I’m not even sure I’m sane. And I think I’d ruin myself just to hear it again. For 25 years, Zayn lived in a world of straight expectations, dating girls, chasing pleasure that always ended in silence and frustration. Sex was a routine, not release. Until one bored night, chasing a thrill, he said yes to something different. A man in a club offered him more than money, he offered a secret, a night of satisfaction like he’d never known. But when Zayn entered that hotel room, he didn’t expect him, the rich, cold, dangerously alluring heir of a conservative empire, whose father publicly condemns everything he hides in the dark. What started as a one-night experiment turned into a dangerous addiction. Without a single touch, Zayn was broken open, undone, and made to scream, cry, and beg, only through sound. Now, even back home, Zayn trembles when he hears his voice in dreams, in memory, in madness. His sheets are always wet. His nights are restless. His body wants more. And the worst part? He's starting to want him, too. 18+ WARNING This story contains explicit male-male content, intense erotic scenes, and psychological seduction. If you're not ready for a world where a voice can break you, proceed cautiously. Read at your discretion.
LGBT+
404 Chs
My Passive Skills are Invincible!

My Passive Skills are Invincible!

"It was an era taken over by a single online game, the ""Second World."" The ""Second World"" offered a vast amount of classes and skills... Micheal, our protagonist, reincarnated back into this era and realized he had a few bugged passive skills that would put him as one of the best. [Passive skill: Damage Reduction: When you receive damage from an enemy, the damage will be reduced accordingly to the reduction percentage. Skill lasts for 10 seconds and takes 10 seconds to cooldown.] [Passive skill: Damage Reflect: When you receive damage, the damage will be reflected accordingly to the reflection percentage.] [Passive skill: Damage Multiplier: When you deal damage to an enemy, the damage you dealt will be multiplied.] [Passive skill: Sword Attack Nullifier: When you attack an enemy with a sword, the enemy will kneel in front of you and catch your blade with their bare hands.] [Passive skill: Priest: When you suffer from damage, automatically heals yourself.] [Passive skill…] [Passive skill…] ......... After reading through all his passive skills, he suddenly realized how invincible he now was. Even though he didn't possessed a single active skill, he could still triumph over everyone else with his passive skills. One day, when the ""Second World"" mysteriously merged with the real world, monsters and divine beings began to invade Earth… That was when Micheal realized that his passive skills have also given him the power to kill these divine beings…"
Sci-fi
346 Chs
Le Mie Abilità Passive Sono Invincibili!

Le Mie Abilità Passive Sono Invincibili!

"Era un'epoca dominata da un singolo gioco online, il "Second World". Il "Second World" offriva una vasta quantità di classi e abilità... Micheal, il nostro protagonista, si è reincarnato in quest'epoca e ha scoperto di avere alcune abilità passive buggate che lo avrebbero reso uno dei migliori. [Abilità passiva: Riduzione del Danno: Quando ricevi danno da un nemico, il danno sarà ridotto in base alla percentuale di riduzione. L'abilità dura 10 secondi e ha un tempo di recupero di 10 secondi.] [Abilità passiva: Riflesso del Danno: Quando ricevi danno, il danno sarà riflesso in base alla percentuale di riflessione.] [Abilità passiva: Moltiplicatore di Danno: Quando infliggi danno a un nemico, il danno che hai inflitto sarà moltiplicato.] [Abilità passiva: Nullificatore di Attacco con Spada: Quando attacchi un nemico con una spada, il nemico si inginocchierà davanti a te e afferrerà la tua lama a mani nude.] [Abilità passiva: Sacerdote: Quando subisci danni, ti curi automaticamente.] [Abilità passiva...] [Abilità passiva...] ......... Dopo aver letto tutte le sue abilità passive, si è improvvisamente reso conto di quanto fosse ormai invincibile. Anche se non possedeva una singola abilità attiva, poteva comunque trionfare su tutti gli altri con le sue abilità passive. Un giorno, quando il "Second World" si è misteriosamente fuso con il mondo reale, mostri ed esseri divini hanno iniziato a invadere la Terra... Fu allora che Micheal si rese conto che le sue abilità passive gli avevano dato anche il potere di uccidere questi esseri divini..."
Sci-fi
346 Chs
What are the advantages of using active or passive voice in a short story?
The advantage of active voice is that it's straightforward. It makes the story easier to follow as it clearly shows who is doing what. For example, 'He built the house'. The passive voice can be useful when you want to be more diplomatic or when the doer is not important. 'The house was built' doesn't focus on who built it, which could be relevant if the story is more about the house itself.
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2024-11-14 05:38
How can one effectively use active or passive voice in a short story?
In a short story, the active voice can be used to make the action more direct and the characters more prominent. For example, 'John hit the ball' makes it clear who is performing the action. The passive voice, like 'The ball was hit by John', can be used when you want to shift the focus. Maybe you want to emphasize the ball rather than John. If the story is about a mysterious object that keeps getting moved around, you could say 'The object was moved again last night' to create a sense of mystery around the action rather than focusing on who did it.
1 answer
2024-11-14 05:43
What are the Examples of Active and Passive Voice in Novels?
Active voice examples in novels are quite common. For instance, 'The young girl picked the flowers'. It shows the girl as the one taking the action. Passive voice examples can add variety. Consider 'The flowers were picked by the young girl'. Sometimes, passive voice is used when the author wants to emphasize the object rather than the subject. For example, in a mystery novel, 'The body was found in the park'. Here the focus is on the discovery of the body rather than who found it. This use of passive voice can create suspense and keep the reader guessing.
1 answer
2024-12-04 02:25
What are the differences between active and passive voice in comics?
In comics, active voice often makes the action more dynamic and engaging. Passive voice can be used for emphasis or to create a specific mood. For example, active voice shows the hero's strength clearly, while passive voice might heighten the mystery around an event.
1 answer
2025-12-28 01:43
What are the characteristics of an active voice short story?
The main characteristic is that the agent of the action is in the forefront. Consider a short story where 'A girl wrote a letter'. The girl is the one taking the action of writing. This makes the narrative more engaging as readers can easily follow who is responsible for each action in the story. It also helps in creating a more dynamic and fast - paced story.
1 answer
2024-11-25 22:41
Tell me a short passive voice funny story.
A cat's tail was tied with a ribbon by a little kid. The cat didn't understand what had happened to its tail. It ran around the room trying to catch its own tail. The cat's bewildered look was hilarious as it was being chased by its own ribbon - tied tail.
1 answer
2024-12-12 02:06
Taste the sweetness, from passive to active
"After tasting the sweetness, one would change from passive to active" was a state of online literature creation. To be more specific, it meant that after the author published his or her work on the online literature platform, he or she would receive praise and recognition from readers, thus stimulating their enthusiasm for creation. From passively accepting feedback from readers, they would actively seek inspiration and improve their creative standards. The emergence of this state was mainly due to the development and popularity of online literature platforms. On the online literature platform, creators could interact with readers in real time and understand the feedback and needs of readers in time, so as to better adjust their creative direction and rhythm. At the same time, the online literature platform also provided creators with more opportunities to showcase and income channels, allowing them to obtain more returns and a sense of accomplishment through their creations. It was important to note that 'going from passive to active after tasting the sweetness' was only a state of online literature creation. Not all creators could achieve it. In order to succeed in the field of online literature, authors needed to have solid writing skills and rich imagination. At the same time, they needed to constantly learn and improve their writing skills to adapt to the needs of readers and changes in the market. While waiting for the TV series, you can also click on the link below to read the classic original work of "Dafeng Nightwatchman"!
1 answer
2024-10-21 06:32
Can you write an example of an active voice short story?
Sure. Once upon a time, a little girl found a magic key. She opened a mysterious door with it. Inside the door, she discovered a beautiful garden full of colorful flowers and friendly animals. The girl played with the animals and picked some flowers to make a lovely bouquet.
3 answers
2024-11-27 00:39
Is it okay to write a story in passive voice?
Yes, it can be okay. Sometimes, using the passive voice adds emphasis or creates a certain tone that works for the story.
3 answers
2024-10-06 16:18
How to write a story without passive voice?
The key is to be conscious of your verb choices. Choose strong, active verbs. And when you review your work, look for forms like 'was + past participle' or 'were + past participle' and try to rephrase them. For instance, 'The door was opened' could become 'He opened the door'.
1 answer
2024-10-16 07:03
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