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I'm An Incubus: Black Blood [In Editing]

I'm An Incubus: Black Blood [In Editing]

University student Rin Ito just wanted a peaceful life, that's all he asked for, but that was all six months ago. Now he's bein forced to pry in a world he never wanted and never knew he had, and he sooo desperately didn't want this either, but the more he discovered about his own self, the more he started questioning his sanity. Yet one question remained, will he continue to stay an Incubus like his father before him, or will he turn into a being far worst and dangerous; only one thin' knows it. But forget about that, it's way too soon? He's barely even discovering his incubus side? Like will he be able to seduce like the rest of his kind? Will he be able to kill to protect the ones he loves? Also, will that yandere chick ever leave him alone?! And what the hell? Why is his magic so unstable!? But forget that, there's something more importantly! Because now it comes down to will he fall from his own path and use what his father gave him, or will he expose who and what he truly is and give in to the wild voices. Or will he just deny it all? Well, that's for you to find out. --- This novel can go anywhere from simple travelling to a quest, to moving to another realm?! Will Rin finally lose his sanity and drain everythin alive dry jus to satisfy his hunger and bloodlust, or will he try somethin different? Damn, I'm pretty sure we know the answer to that. Anyways, I'm just lettin you know he's kinda submissive in the begining and might be a puny Mc, But as the book goes on so does his powers, and he started becoming.. More of a Demon than you may think. Also it'll seem like he's powerful let's say around the first to the 100th chapter, but he's in no way truly powerful. Also in the first volume there will be a few cases an long missions where he does become a girl, but after the first 100 chapters it's all going to be about him as a male till I see got that we need him to turn into his female form. This book revolves around most to all races. The cover belongs to someone else, if they want it to be removed just find a way to let me know or I won't do it. . . . . . Information. . . . . I started this book 2 years ago, and as of now, Dec 7th, 2022, I'm starting to go back over it and edit it so I can start writing again, mainly to spite a friend on this site. . . . . .Recommended. . . . . Also I have a friend who's with me most of the times, an stuff, their name is TurtleMaster6319, show them some love and check out their work, it's pretty good you know. Also about them, they used to help me and Eve out with a bunch of our novels together, Eve the other author is now in collage and no longer with us, so it's just me.
Urban
184 Chs
The Witch CEO is NOT a Demoness [Completed] (Editing--On Process)

The Witch CEO is NOT a Demoness [Completed] (Editing--On Process)

High bun, eyeglasses, long sleeve shirt and plaited skirt. Dressed so strictly, FengJiu reached 28 without having any intimate interaction with men. At an early age, being an orphan, FengJiu dedicated herself on taking good care of her grandfather and their business, choosing to live a life different from a normal teenager. Now, as the CEO of Feng International, people view her as a stoic woman without emotions. Deep inside, FengJiu is like any other women, want to experience the beauty of life and romance. Due to the pressure of her grandfather in her marriage, FengJiu decided to let herself experience the life of a single woman without worries before tying the knot (marriage). For the first time in her life, she got drunk and party all night. Huh? Why is she naked? Eh? Ehh?! "Woman, after eating me dry, you have to take responsibility." a shameless man said. In an instant, she became his 'sugar mommy'. What?! This shameless NEET whom she 'adopted' is the owner of Lu Corporation, her enemy?! Before she could escape, she got tied on the bed. "Woman, you better chose wisely. You will marry me or I will marry you?" She strictly rejects him after knowing everything but every inch of her body craves for him otherwise. (N.E.E.T.- Not in Education, Employment or Training aka Unemployed) [PLEASE ADOPT ME \(T^T)/ and DONATE @ paypal.me/sayurihyuuga] New Novel- The Rebirth of the Female Antagonist: XuanRong [Webnovel] Cover: Pristine Editor and Proofreader: RenTheView and Moonlitnight.
General
146 Chs
Protective Custody - The Demon King (EDITING)

Protective Custody - The Demon King (EDITING)

(MATURE CONTENT) Diviya just lost everything she holds dear to her in the span of a lunch date with friends and not in a good way. Now with the entity that’s hunting her, she has no choice but to run and go into protective custody. A program run by the Demon King himself. Diviya was not prepared for what she was about to walk into. Join her as she navigates this new world and get to the bottom of who is after her and what happened to her parents, Adopted and Biological all the while dealing with all the responsibilities that comes with being mated to the Demon King. ****************************** The Demon King is a beautiful beast, part human, his human part immortal, also he is part demon, a beast of a Wolf and a Vampire. He transforms beautifully and effortlessly from magical being to magical being each having different abilities and he have mastered them all. With the impending prophesy looming over his head the Demon King had a major problem with love. He knew all too well what love can do to someone, he like so many others thought it made them weak, he always vowed he would never fall in love, he vowed he would never allow himself to be weak again and he would never mate. He paid the price once and he would not do it again. As such he never had any serious relationships or any sort of meaningful courtships since. In the end he certainly was not ready when a gorgeous little fighter who was in need of protection just struts into his life drawing all sorts of foreign emotions out of him. Can he stick to his plans and firm belief in never mating? Dive in and find out… *************************************** Excerpt: He easily captures her lips, kissing her soft and gentle at first, as if savoring every detail and imprint of her sweet lips. Her lips were so soft, she taste amazing and she smells so damn intoxicating. He simply could not get enough and it did not take too long before he got a bit greedy wanting more and demanded entrance which she quickly granted and he dove into the kiss. She was delicious, he ravaged her sweet perky lips and mouth. His hands runs down her sides caressing her body as he touch and feels his way down. Stopping to caress her luscious butt, giving a gentle squeeze and he made a noise of pure pleasure at feeling her and touching her like this. He was feeling the strangest things, emotions that have long since been dead are awakening. Diviya let's out a little noise of her own when he grabbed her butt, she was overcome with need. Her core throbbed, she then lifts a foot wantonly desperately needing friction between her legs and Adonis' hands slid to the back of her thighs just below her butt, cupping her and he lifts her not breaking from their kiss. Diviya instinctively wraps her legs around him as she tightens her hold on his neck while she plays with the hair at the nape and kisses him wholeheartedly following his lead. Tongues gliding and trashing against the other one second, then the next lower lip being bitten and teased, they moved as one. Their tongues danced beautifully tasting their fill of each other. Heat coursing through them. Adonis turns with her in his hand and he leans his butt half way sitting on the edge of a huge high table in the middle of the closet. When suddenly Diviya's lower half of her body took on a life of its own and it started to grind into him, feeling his hardness against her core, reveling in the delicious feeling that act elicited, she did it again. Adonis hissed at the sensations, and the kiss got hungrier, wilder…. #R18
Fantasy
67 Chs
What is developmental editing in fiction?
Developmental editing for fiction focuses on improving the overall structure, plot, and character development of a story. It helps make the narrative more coherent and engaging.
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2024-10-10 07:26
What are the key aspects of developmental editing in fiction?
One key aspect is character development. Editors look at whether the characters are well - rounded, with clear motives and arcs. Another is plot structure. They ensure the story has a logical flow, with rising action, a climax, and a satisfying resolution. Also, the pacing needs to be right; not too slow or too fast to keep the reader engaged.
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2024-11-14 16:07
What is developmental fiction editing and how does it differ from other editing types?
Developmental fiction editing is a process focused on improving the overall structure and plot of a fictional work. It's different from basic proofreading or line editing because it looks at the big picture of the story.
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2024-10-12 13:54
How can an author benefit from developmental editing for their fiction?
Authors can get a fresh perspective. The editor can spot plot holes or character inconsistencies that the author might have missed. It helps improve the overall quality of the story.
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2024-11-14 21:48
Who are the top developmental editors in science fiction?
Another great one might be Gardner Dozois. He was highly regarded for his editorial acumen in the science fiction genre. He had an eye for great stories and helped many authors refine their works. He was involved in many important anthologies and had a long - standing influence on the field.
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2024-12-14 21:03
How was the editing process in the editing room for Pulp Fiction?
The editing process for Pulp Fiction was complex. It involved a lot of trial and error to get the non - linear structure just right. The editor had to ensure that each scene transitioned smoothly into the next, even when jumping between different timelines.
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2024-11-01 08:15
Fiction-editing System Fictions
The following are some recommendations for the life of an editor: 1. " I Can Editor Life ": This novel tells the story of the protagonist returning to his previous life through a mysterious channel after his death, trying to change the trajectory of his life and correct his past mistakes. 2. " The Life Restarting System: I can edit my life ": This novel tells the story of the protagonist using a system to restart his life and realize his wishes and goals. 3. " The Strongest Anti-Trick System ": This novel tells the story of the protagonist using an anti-trick system in the cultivation world to defeat his opponent and show his strength. 4. [The Strongest Dojo System: This novel tells the story of the protagonist who continuously improves his martial arts and strength through a dojo system to become the strongest.] 5. " Omnipotent Duplication System ": This novel tells the story of the protagonist possessing an Omnipotent Duplication System that can duplicate the abilities and skills of others and become an invincible existence. Please note that the novels recommended above are based on the search results provided and may not be accurate.
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2025-01-01 10:13
What qualities do top developmental editors in science fiction possess?
One important quality is a deep understanding of the science fiction genre. They need to know the tropes, the history, and the potential future directions of the genre.
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2024-12-14 19:40
The Impact of Gene Editing in Science Fiction on the Perception of Real - World Gene Editing
In science fiction, gene editing is a popular theme. The way it's presented can really sway how people think about real - world gene editing. For example, consider a story where gene editing is used to make people immortal. This might make some people excited about the possibilities in real life, but it also might make others worried about overpopulation and the ethics of such a thing. Also, when sci - fi shows gene editing being used for military purposes to create invincible soldiers, it can make the public more cautious about the development of gene editing technology in the real world. Overall, science fiction has a big role in influencing public attitudes towards gene editing.
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2024-12-13 21:53
What are the key elements in editing fiction?
The key elements in editing fiction include plot, character, and dialogue. The plot should be engaging and well - structured. Characters need to be well - developed, with their own personalities, motives, and arcs. Good dialogue should sound natural and move the story forward.
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2024-10-31 17:54
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