There were novels similar to Invincible Annoyance:
Book of Troubled Times, Author: Ji Cha
2:"Spiritual Realm Walker", Author: Xiao Langjun
3: The Tang's Table, Author: Jie and 2
4."King of Familiars", Author: Light Spring Flowing Sound
Fairy, Please Listen to My Explanation, Author: Mi Tian Building
National Forensic Medicine, Author: Zhiniao Village
7:"Wait, Heroine." Author: Guan Guan Gongzi
8: Mantang Colorful, Author: Weird Cousin
9:"Hidden Dead Corner", Author: Get Lost
Final Divine Duty, Author: Tuoba Goudan
Beyond Time, Author: Er Gen
"This Game Is Too Real." Author: Chen Xing LL
Red Heart Sky Patrol, Author: What's the Matter?
Ring of Destiny, Author: Squid Who Loves to Dive
National Master of Ming Dynasty, Author: West Lake Encountered Rain
Choose a Day to Ascend, Author: Otaku Pig
17:"Who's in Love After Rebirth?" Author: What's Wrong?
Deep Sea Ember, Author: Yuantong
Chapter 19: Cultivation in the Chaotic World of Demonic Martial Arts, Author: Wenplagiarism
20:"Who told him to cultivate!" Author: The Whitest Crow
The following is a detailed introduction of these novels:
1."Book of Troubled Times":"Book of Troubled Times" is a novel with a martial arts theme. The author, Ji Cha, uses a unique harem writing style to show us a world full of chivalry and affection. The story began with the protagonist, a college student, repeatedly falling into the same strange dream. In order to solve the mystery of this dream, he went to a supernatural divination shop and accidentally transmigrated to a village that was about to be destroyed. In this strange world, the protagonist was forced to join the Demon Sect and began his journey of survival.
The plot of this novel was tightly paced, and the plot was full of ups and downs, making it difficult for people to stop. The author, Ji Cha, was very good at portraying the characters. Whether it was the wise and decisive male lead or the female leads, each character had a vivid personality and left a deep impression on people. Especially the interaction with the beauty, the author described it very vividly and interestingly. The story incorporated some humorous elements, as well as details that imperceptibly made the world more real, allowing the protagonist to walk further in his heart.
The setting of this novel was very interesting, and the description of the dungeon was also very good. It was just that the protagonist's cheat was a little too big, and he almost crushed all the way through, which might make some readers feel a little dull. But overall,"Book of Troubled Times" was a novel that was worth reading, especially for those readers who liked Wuxia. This book would definitely bring a different reading experience.
2."Spirit Realm Walker": It's a new sci-fi novel by the newspaper seller. Even the Almighty felt that it was a very serious new book.
3."Tang People's Table":"Tang People's Table" was a very exciting novel. The author used the Tang Dynasty as the background and told the story of a young man who traveled to the Western Regions of the Tang Dynasty. This young man used his modern knowledge and skills to overcome difficulties and finally returned to Chang 'an, the center of the Tang Empire. Chang 'an City was resplendent, with gold everywhere and beautiful women everywhere, making people yearn for it. This book was not only a transmigration novel, but also a food novel. The author's detailed description of the food of the Tang Dynasty made people drool. The main character, Yun Chu, used his knowledge and skills to not only establish his position in the Western Regions of the Tang Dynasty, but also to save the dying and heal the wounded. He repeatedly made extraordinary achievements and received much attention. The food and character descriptions in the book were excellent, making it very enjoyable to read. Overall, this book was a highly recommended novel, especially for lovers of Tang Dynasty history and food.
King of Familiar: Er Quan's New Book! The new era super beast king was here!😆
5:"Fairy, Please Listen to My Explanation": Big Sister, Young Girl
6."National Forensic Science": Bird and Pig's new book, the beginning of forensic science. The system can obtain various skills, such as gourmet food, trace examination, spot investigation, ranking…The author is a professional writer. He writes like what he writes. The description of daily life is very detailed, and he even occasionally popularizes some strange and cold knowledge.
Every day, he would update two times, one on progress, and the other on water. It looked very comfortable and reflected the unique human touch and sense of immersion of the city.
Tagged with: Criminal Investigation, Food, Daily Life, Demolition of the Second Generation, Hanging Orchid
7."Wait, Heroine":"Wait, Heroine" was a very interesting book. The character of the heroine was very distinct. She did not want to pay attention to others at all and even rolled her eyes at them. This unique personality left a deep impression on everyone. The storyline was also very attractive, and after reading a few chapters, people couldn't help but want to continue reading. The author's writing was excellent. Whether it was the setting or the fighting scenes, they were all very vivid. This book could be said to be a pure male fantasy novel. The readers did not need to have too many requirements in other aspects, as long as they were happy. In addition, the author was also one of the newly appointed Twelve Heavenly Kings in 2022. His work, The Prince Is Fierce, The Fairy Is Fierce, was also very outstanding. All in all,"Wait, Heroine" was a highly recommended book.
8."Mantang Colorful Colors":"Mantang Colorful Colors" was a historical novel. It was set in the Tang Dynasty and told the story of a modern person, Xue Bai, who traveled to the Tang Dynasty. The plot was compact, the writing was experienced, and the character settings were rich, leaving a deep impression. When the author described the historical figures, it was in accordance with the historical records, and he was good at portraying the characters in detail. Xue Bai's origins in the story had caused many disturbances, filling people with anticipation. The author was good at writing in ambush. His logic was reasonable, his rhythm was compact, and his scheming was amazing. Overall, this was a historical novel that was worth recommending to the readers.
9."Hidden Dead Corner": Get lost, new book.
Sci-fi horror genre? The protagonist was reborn in a sci-fi version of the modern world. He was captured by a strange space and would enter it from time to time to face monster attacks. However, the protagonist had a golden finger and was currently fighting inside.
[Why I'm reading this book: To be honest, with the toxic setting at the beginning, if it wasn't written by Scram, I would have abandoned the book immediately. I can only say that this is the power of the brand. It allows you to have more tolerance and try more.] I had the same opinion as many people. Scram was very suitable for creating this kind of strange and scary atmosphere. It was quite accurate. However, it seemed that he did not like to write this. At least, the current chapter was quite good in this aspect.
[Why not read this book: The character of the little fairy sister at the beginning is too disgusting. Speaking of which, the sisters in Get Lost don't seem like normal people.] Secondly, it was a bit of a noob to write about the mecha. It was also because of this that many people had the ptsd of the mecha. However, he had said in the group that he would not write about the mecha. At present, the cheat in this book was more like the Masked Rider, so he would have to wait and see. There was also something that everyone knew. He was a typical example of someone who was stunning at the beginning and weak at the middle. He could not guarantee what would happen after that.
In general, the grain would be evaluated according to the situation.
10. Final Divine Duty: Get lost (High Martial Arts)
The author is a high-level martial arts author in FL. His pace is good and his level is relatively fast. I hope it won't collapse in the later stages.
11."Beyond Time": Heaven and Earth are the guest houses of all living beings, and time is a passer-by from ancient times to the present.
The difference between life and death
It was as if dreams and awakenings were different, changing.
It's impossible to ask.
Then, beyond life and death, beyond heaven and earth, beyond time, what awaits us?
This was Er Gen's sixth novel, Beyond Time, after "The Rebel Immortal,""Seeking the Demon,""I Want to Seal the Heavens,""One Thought of Eternity," and "Three Inches of Humanity."
"This Game Is Too Real":"This Game Is Too Real" is a fascinating novel. The author's prediction ability was admirable. The plot was compact and the setting was unique. The book described the situation of the doomsday infrastructure, making people feel as if they were on the wasteland, feeling the scene of players working hard to survive in a difficult environment. Although the female character was not very likable, it did not affect the overall story's excitement. Through the various operations of the idiotic players, the author showed the magnificent scene of them building a technology tree from scratch on the wasteland and changing the situation of the apocalypse. This book was set in a game, but it was not limited to the game itself. Instead, it integrated the game elements into real life, giving people inspiration and thinking. In short, This Game Is Too Real was a good book worth recommending.
13."Red Heart Sky Patrol": I accidentally flipped through a book. I just started reading it, and I have some feelings! It should be a rather good and unconventional book! All the best, author! Let's strive to become a god with just one book!
Ring of Fate: The Secret World Part 2
In the year 1368, at the end of July, Crimson would descend from the sky.
It was currently a 4-star Glory game.
"Great Ming State Preceptor":"Great Ming State Preceptor" is a rare historical text. The author has shown a solid foundation in writing. The story started from the protagonist's release from prison. He began by asking for death and then gave a sermon that shocked Zhu Di. It gave people a sense of absurdity, but it also made people want to continue reading. Through step-by-step reasoning and intelligent descriptions, the author made the protagonist stand out in history. The historical content of this book had already surpassed that of his father, Han Gaozu, and the author was still constantly updating it. As a historical novel, although the plot was not too complicated, the author's writing style and the shaping of the protagonist allowed the readers to immerse themselves in it and enjoy the pleasure of reading. In general,'The Great Ming State Preceptor' was a historical novel that made people's eyes light up and was worth reading.
Chapter 16: Ascending on an Choosing Day
Author: House Pig
[Type: Xianxia]
<<Status: In Progress>>
[Keyword: Cultivation, Inner Volume, Hot Blood, Pursuit of Freedom]
[Reward index:]️️️️
Reason for recommendation:
The opening Snake Catcher could be said to be a stroke of genius. There were many identities of the protagonists, from the Snake Catcher at the beginning to the Immortal Immortal, the bandit leader Xu Tianzun, and so on.
Although there were many changes in his identity, the wildness in the protagonist's heart, his desire for equality, his pursuit of freedom, and his insistence on himself had not changed.
Of course, under Master Snake's tutelage, the protagonist was still not good at communicating. If not for his strong skills, he might have been killed by the enemy long ago.
If the spiritual core of the Book of the Shepherds was reform, then the spiritual core of the Book of Ascending was to live and recognize the true self.
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Introduction:
As a snake hunter, Xu Ying had always been honest and diligent until this day when he caught a different snake…
On the first day of the third month, incense was burning everywhere in the Divine Land. The statues that protected the villages, towns, cities, and counties woke up one after another to enjoy the sacrifices of the people.
However, from that day onwards, the world was in chaos.
This book is also known as "996 Immortal Cultivation","007 also cultivates","Inner Volume","Roll to Death","No F * cking Ascension","Good Pit","Pit Deep Pit","Help Me Up","When I was 35, My Blessing Came" and "The Appearance of Great Demon King Xu"!
"Who's in Love After Rebirth?""Who's in Love After Rebirth?" was a humorous novel. The author's exquisite writing skills left a deep impression. This book not only had blind spots beyond imagination, but it also made people feel the warm little things that happened around them. The protagonist's personality was also very likable, making people want to continue chasing after him. The author's writing style and storytelling were very strong. He combined the web novel routine with the ancient style writing style quite well. Moreover, he was especially good at digging holes, making people unable to stop. The female lead, Feng Daidai, was also very likable, adding more charm to the novel. Overall, this book is an unforgettable novel and is worth recommending.
18:"Deep Sea Ember": Captain Duncan, who looks gloomy and dignified on the surface but is panicking on the inside, the noisy tool Goat Head, the trash talking gothic doll Alice, the witchcraft transmission pigeon Ai Yi... This is a great adventure in the boundless sea full of love and courage, warmth and laughter (Oh my god!)
Big Eyeball's rhythm was unique. Even if it was a heavy plot, he could easily tell the story. It was even comfortable to read. Wasn't this…a whole bunch of French fries?
Tagged: Steampunk, Cthulhu, Three Concepts
Chapter 19: Cultivation in the Chaotic World of the Demonic Martial Arts: A New Book of a Transcriptionist!
The golden finger was to travel back and forth between two worlds, one for cultivation and the other for martial arts.
Decisive and unconventional, brilliant!
There were 24 chapters on the shelves, and now there were more than 100 chapters.
🌹🌹🌹
"Who told him to cultivate!" "Who told him to cultivate!" It was a Xianxia novel. The author used a humorous and unique writing style to successfully raise the novel to a new level. The world constructed by the author was complete and perfect, and the plot was controlled just right. After the main character, Lu Yang, became a disciple of Dao Seeking Sect, he embarked on a different path of cultivation. The Immortal Cultivation world in the story was connected to real life, emotions, psychology, society, and history, giving people inspiration. The author's imagination was very big. The main character had a sword spirit root and extraordinary talent in magic. He was able to practice Spatial Bending into Spatial Bending and Spatial Bending. This unique creativity was refreshing. The few supporting characters were also drawn in an interesting way. The entire sect was like the fourth natural disaster. The whole story looked very interesting, like a funny immortal cultivation, making people enjoy it. The author's writing style was humorous and humorous. The short stories were one after another, making it very enjoyable to read. In short,"Who told him to cultivate!" It was a delightful and relaxing novel with a five-star recommendation index.
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There were novels similar to The Road Without Annoyance:
Book of Troubled Times, Author: Ji Cha
2:"Spiritual Realm Walker", Author: Xiao Langjun
3: The Tang's Table, Author: Jie and 2
4."King of Familiars", Author: Light Spring Flowing Sound
Fairy, Please Listen to My Explanation, Author: Mi Tian Building
National Forensic Medicine, Author: Zhiniao Village
7:"Wait, Heroine." Author: Guan Guan Gongzi
8: Mantang Colorful, Author: Weird Cousin
9:"Hidden Dead Corner", Author: Get Lost
Final Divine Duty, Author: Tuoba Goudan
Beyond Time, Author: Er Gen
"This Game Is Too Real." Author: Chen Xing LL
Red Heart Sky Patrol, Author: What's the Matter?
Ring of Destiny, Author: Squid Who Loves to Dive
National Master of Ming Dynasty, Author: West Lake Encountered Rain
Choose a Day to Ascend, Author: Otaku Pig
17:"Who's in Love After Rebirth?" Author: What's Wrong?
Deep Sea Ember, Author: Yuantong
Chapter 19: Cultivation in the Chaotic World of Demonic Martial Arts, Author: Wenplagiarism
20:"Who told him to cultivate!" Author: The Whitest Crow
The following is a detailed introduction of these novels:
1.<<Book of Troubled Times>>: Zhao Changhe, the person who destroyed the rumors, is here!
Wild geese return to pass silk letters, pheasants fall to dance red feathers.
The cottage is full of spring sleep, and the sun outside the window is late.
The flag in the center is bright and beautiful, as beautiful as the flowers.
The moon opens the sky mirror, and the tall building tries to make up at night.
2.<<Spirit Realm Walker>>: From ancient times to the present, it is rumored that there is a Spirit Realm in the world.
Regarding the Spirit Realm, there were many different opinions among the famous people of the past dynasties.
"From Qi to Tang, the mountains are desolate and the spirit realm is lonely. Few people visit."
"Spirit Realm is hard to come by, but Ghost Craftsmen are hard to come by."
3."The Tang's Table":"The Tang's Table" is a good book that makes people's eyes light up. From a unique perspective, the author compared the people and affairs of the world to the dishes on the table, vividly presenting the history and culture of the Tang Dynasty. Through the primitive taste of the ingredients
4."King of Familiars": In this brand new era of familiars, who can become the well-deserved king of familiars?
5."Fairy, Please Listen to My Explanation":[Ranking Index]:
[Tagging Points: Xianxia·Sect·Imperial Court·Many Female Leaders·Anti-routine]
[Work Status: 890,000 (Already on shelves)]
[Female Lead Collection: Ran Qingmo, Tianyan, Su Jinxuan, Li Qingyan, Bai Muxi]
The new book by a new author was a little slow to update, but the quality was guaranteed. It was definitely a new book at the immortal grass level. The author was Mi Tian Building. In his opinion, to be able to write such a book, such a style of writing, and such a plot foreshadowing, there was a high chance that he was a big shot. There was nothing to be said about the writing style. It was full of Xianxia flavor, full of classics, and detailed descriptions. It really looked like he was reading a script. The author might have been aiming for an adaptation, and he had a lot of ideas. In terms of the plot, the author had really done a good job of foreshadowing it. He did not completely forget his foreshadowing at the end like other authors. The plot was connected to each other, and there was basically nothing unnecessary. It really attracted the readers. The characters were full of the characteristics of Xianxia and many female protagonists. Basically, every female protagonist had their own characteristics. Interestingly, there were almost two female protagonists with each personality in the author's novel. One was complete and the other was still growing. It gave people the feeling that they were playing around. The funniest thing was that the author didn't stick to the usual routine. After killing the main character of the game, he didn't follow the plot. The female lead of the plot didn't accept him. Instead, many of them received a box lunch when they appeared. It was impossible to guess who the real female lead was, giving people a feeling of pity and certainty.
6: National Forensic: Immortal Grass
I'll give you the points first. I like this kind of thing very much. The pace of solving the case is slightly faster, and there are many points in the plot that make you feel discouraged and smile.
7:"Heroine, Wait": Heroine, Wait, Do You Know Who I Am?
He knew that she was the empress's favorite minister, the lover of the rebel leader, and the young master of a famous sect in the pugilistic world. You're the one I'm chopping!
It was a very refreshing book, strongly recommended.
8."Mantang Colorful Scenery": Rating: AAAAA
The prosperous Chang 'an City was full of undercurrents.
Under the rule of the court, people were arrogant and extravagant, and they fought for power endlessly. The country was in turmoil, the Hu people rebelled, and human lives were like grass.
This was the best moment for the Great Tang, and also the worst moment…
9."Hidden Dead Corner": Rating: AAAAA1
Recently, he had been following a book. The works of Get Lost were basically guaranteed to be of good quality. Generally speaking, there were very few brainless and refreshing works.
The logic of this book is on the line, the protagonist's IQ is on the line, and the character settings are very interesting. I'll keep it as a collection.
Final Divine Duty: Get Out of the Way
I heard that it's the avatar of an author who logged into the future ten thousand years ago. Gao Wu's book is pretty good and pretty cool. It's just that he pulled it after he left the planet. This one seems to be doing well at the moment, so I guess it's considered fodder.
11."Beyond Time": Heaven and Earth are the guest houses of all living beings, and time is a passer-by from ancient times to the present.
The difference between life and death was like the difference between dreams and waking up. It was ever-changing and could not be questioned.
Then, beyond life and death, beyond heaven and earth, beyond time, what awaits us?
"This Game Is Too Real":"This Game Is Too Real" is a highly recommended novel. The story told the story of the male protagonist who traveled to the wasteland after the nuclear war and became a hidden refuge. He could connect with the modern world network with the help of AI robots and summon the player's consciousness to be implanted into the clone. The author's writing style was excellent, and the image of the male lead was also very clear. There was no greasy feeling of wheels turning at the slightest disagreement. The plot setting was also very interesting, combining elements such as exploration, cultivation, and management. The setting of the wasteland was also very attractive, such as Resident Evil, sci-fi monsters, high-tech corps, and so on. These elements were very harmonious. The player settings were also very interesting, adding to the fun. Overall, this book was very interesting and recommended to readers who like this kind of topic.
"Red Heart Sky Patrol":"Red Heart Sky Patrol" was a novel about orthodox cultivation. Although it was a little slow, as long as one had patience, they could get through the first few chapters. After that, the plot would start to take off. This book gave people the feeling of a person in their dreams. The author's writing style had the feeling of a martial arts classic, but it also integrated the world view of the immortal cultivation type. The plot foreshadowing, character creation, and character description were all excellent. Even though the author was a newcomer to web novels, this book had already shown great potential, making people look forward to the author becoming a god in one book. Although this book was slow to read, it didn't affect the overall reading experience. Instead, it made people want to finish reading a volume in one go and then savor the plot and foreshadowing in detail. Overall, Red Heart Sky Patrol was a pretty good novel. It was worth reading for readers who were in a book shortage.
Ring of Destiny: I'm looking forward to it! Squid's new book, the Lord of the Mysteries's sequels, finally waiting for the day after two years
"Great Ming State Preceptor":"Great Ming State Preceptor" was a work of immortal grass. The author used a unique way of teaching to reveal modern knowledge to the people of the Ming Dynasty. This book was completely different from the previous ones. It was refreshing. The author had a high degree of education, and he was very familiar with politics, philosophy, geography, and other content, allowing readers to gain inspiration from reading. Especially the author's writing style and storytelling were very strong. He combined the web novel routine with the ancient style writing style quite well, making people unable to stop. Although the reviews for this book weren't very good compared to the other books, overall, it was still worthy of this position. The greatest feature of the book was its rich introduction of theoretical knowledge. Combined with the method of using history as a mirror, it gave people the feeling of looking at China's thousands of years and calculating the infinite possibilities of the future. Although this book placed too much emphasis on theory and often shook the book bag, it still gave the readers a strong belief that this path would definitely succeed. In short,"Great Ming's Imperial Preceptor" was a book worthy of recommendation. Whether it was in terms of content or style, it brought great enjoyment to people.
"Ascending on an Ascending Day":"Ascending on an Ascending Day" is a fascinating novel. The author used the writing technique of talent to let the readers feel the strength and extraordinariness of the protagonist. In the story, there was a reading snake named Niu Kuanqi, a snake-catching teenager named Xu Ying, and a big bronze bell that said that stealing was not stealing. These elements filled people with anticipation and curiosity. Every story in the work was very exciting. The charm of each character was very unique. Everyone had their own personality and characteristics. The author's setting was also very interesting, and the dungeon was also very well written. The only regret was that the protagonist's cheat was a little too big. It was almost overwhelming, which made the readers feel a lack of challenge and tension. However, overall, this book was still worth reading, especially when there was a shortage of books.
"Who's in Love After Rebirth?""Who's in Love After Rebirth?" was a surprising novel. The author had displayed an extraordinary imagination. The plot development was unexpected, and every step was filled with excitement and surprise. The story was about a 40-year-old worker who was reborn. He was hooked by a green tea girl for 6.7 years before he finally woke up and met a new partner. This book was full of happy jokes and natural memes, making people feel very happy. Overall, this book had a recommendation score of 8.3 points. It was a book worth recommending.
18:"Deep Sea Ember": * Save Stream: recommended, the plot and setting are very good *
[Keyword: Invincible Style, Anomaly, Transmigration]
Plot:
<Character Setting: Darling (The transition from an otaku to a ghost captain is smooth and reasonable)>
Worldview Completeness:
[Character Setting: [Traverser][Specter Ship Captain][Comedian][Has a flexible moral bottom line][Complicated background][Extremely strong][Good adaptability]
[World Setting: Abnormality, vision][True God, Evil God]
[Short comment: The plot is more of a day-to-day story, and the changes in the characters 'personalities are not abrupt. If you want to see the world setting, you can look for the comments at the end of each chapter to analyze it.]
The character was probably a law-abiding young man in modern society. He treated good people with kindness and never showed mercy to evil cultists.
The author's level and quality were very high. It was very difficult for a plot to give away a daughter or a harem plot to appear. There was a high chance that it was a plot to raise a daughter.
<<Strengths>>[The intelligence reduction segment doesn't exist]>[The daily life is interwoven with intense plots]>[The atmosphere on the ship is relaxed and interesting]>[Similar to the invincible style but the plot battle strength is not broken]>
Some people might not like the fact that he was a true law-abiding young man. He would never kill the innocent, steal, or rob. The overall world setting was biased towards the Cthulhu system.
2022/9/14
19:"Cultivation in the Chaotic World of Demonic Martial Arts": Series
Farming, people flow behind the scenes, group like wits, decisive killing
Fang Xi wore it, and it was the second time!
In the cultivation world, I was a yes-man, but in the Otherworld, I was a punching bag! He did not expect that after thousands of years, he would also become a big shot in the cultivation world!
(Gou Dao Changsheng + Unlimited Style, a copy of the text, a high-quality book, please read it without worry.)
"Who told him to cultivate!" [Lezi Xiuxian]"I have repeatedly stressed that the ethos of the cultivation world has always been crooked. I didn't lead it astray. It is said that history books are written by the victors. Then why are there always people framing me after I win? "Sword Immortal Lu Yang said this to the reporters, expressing his anger.
The next day.
"I have repeatedly emphasized that I am the one who has led the cultivation world astray. "Sword Immortal Lu Yang said this in an interview with the reporters, expressing his anger. 'Daily Cultivation' reporting for you.
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One way to do it is by having the character stomp their feet or throw things around in frustration. Also, using thought bubbles with angry words can convey annoyance. For example, 'This is so annoying!'
Well, start with a hook. Something that grabs the reader's attention right away, like a really interesting quote from the novel or a thought - provoking question related to the story. Then, talk about the genre and how your novel stands out within that genre. If it's a romance, what makes it different from other romances? Don't forget to mention your writing style, whether it's lyrical, fast - paced, or humorous. And end with a call to action, like asking the recipient if they'd like to read a sample chapter.
A great hook is essential. It could be a unique premise, like a world where time runs backwards for the main character. Another key element is a clear description of the conflict. This makes the story seem more engaging. Also, mention the target readership. If it's aimed at young adults, say so and explain why.
One way is through the choice of words. For example, use short, clipped sentences like 'I asked, evenly enough, though a bit of irritation crept into my voice.' This shows calmness in the overall tone but also hints at annoyance. Another method is to describe the character's body language subtly. Say, 'He asked, his hands clenched just a little tighter than normal, his voice steady but with an edge.'
Maupassant's Chagrin was a short story about a wealthy businessman who fell into despair and regret after losing his property and power.
The main theme of the novel is the complexity and multifarious nature of human nature. Through the description of the protagonist, the author showed that there was a greedy and selfish side to human nature, as well as a kind and generous side. After losing his wealth and power, the protagonist felt extreme regret and despair, but at the same time, he showed his appreciation for life and reflected on his past mistakes.
Through the novel, Maupassant expressed his concern and thinking about human nature, emphasizing the complexity and variety of human nature, making people realize that people are not only rich in material wealth, but also rich in spirit.
It could be that he was trying to maintain his composure in front of others in the story. In the fanfic, perhaps there were people he didn't want to show his full irritation to. So, he asked calmly even though he was a bit annoyed. For instance, if it was a social setting where he had to uphold a certain image.