It was his first time writing a novel…Here's a chapter... Everyone, give me some advice

2024-09-13 19:52

Time passed in a flash. The originally clear sky was replaced by the night sky. This meant that the day was coming to an end. The night on Mount Redpine was quiet. Other than the rustling of the wind in the forest and the cries of some nighttime animals, there was nothing else. In the mountain forest, a thatched cottage that looked simple but was comfortable on the inside was still faintly flickering with candlelight. Fu Tianlin, who had been practicing for a day, lay on the bed in the thatched cottage. His entire body was sore. He was indeed exhausted today! It took him more than an hour to even finish dinner. The hand holding the chopsticks kept shaking without listening to his instructions. It was difficult for him to pick up a piece of food or eat a piece of rice. After dinner, he lay down on a simple bed that was made of wooden planks and covered with a layer of straw. On the straw was a layer of quilt as a mattress. He tried his best to relax, relax, and relax until he fell asleep unknowingly. His weak breathing sounded rhythmically. His small mouth was slightly open. His saliva slowly flowed out bit by bit. This was the state he was in after he fell asleep! Li Shen softened his footsteps and walked to the bedside to sit down slowly. Every movement of his was very light. He sat quietly at the side and looked at Fu Tianlin, who was sleeping soundly. His eyes revealed love, just like a father looking at his sleeping child. He stretched out his calloused hand and gently helped Fu Tianlin tidy up his slightly long bangs. He thought to himself,"If my child was still alive, he should be that old, right?" Just as Li Shen was immersed in his thoughts, a middle-aged man dressed in black brocade stood outside the door. The middle-aged man had arrived without a sound as if he had appeared out of thin air. The middle-aged man's appearance pulled Li Shen back from his thoughts. Li Shen turned to look at the middle-aged man without any surprise in his eyes, as if he had already known about the middle-aged man's sudden appearance. He said calmly,"You're here." The middle-aged man nodded in response. He looked at the sleeping Fu Tianlin and asked,"Is he asleep?”. " Yes, he's exhausted today. He's sleeping soundly," Li Shen said kindly as he looked at Fu Tianlin who was sleeping soundly. The middle-aged man looked at the sleeping Fu Tianlin and said with a smile,"It seems that his body is much better. His face is much ruddy compared to when I sent him here!" "That's right. This child's physique is good. Coupled with the prescription given by the living Yama, he recovered very quickly…By the way, how's your investigation going?" The middle-aged man did not respond. He first looked at Fu Tianlin and then said to Li Shen,"Let's talk outside." Don't let the child hear you!" The two of them walked to the open space outside the thatched cottage. The stars in the sky, the chirping of crickets, and the gentle breeze from the mountains made them feel extremely comfortable. The middle-aged man also felt a sense of comfort unconsciously. He muttered," No wonder you chose to settle down here. This is indeed a good place!" "Yeah, this place is far away from worldly disputes. It's very suitable for people like me to grow old here," said Li Shen. The middle-aged man smiled when he heard this. The world-famous Sea Shaking Saber wants to retire?" "One Blade Shakes the Ocean?" Li Shen said with a bitter smile. I can't accept this title anymore. I'm just a person waiting to die, no matter how resounding the title is, it's just empty talk to me." The middle-aged man smiled bitterly at Li Shen's self-mockery. Back then, the " One Saber Shakes the Ocean " who single-handedly defeated the Eighteenth Horse Gang on the Shahama Ancient Road had now become a person who lived alone in the mountains and waited for death all day long…Hehe…How sad… "Aren't you lonely here?" asked the middle-aged man. Other than you, the entire mountain... There shouldn't be anyone else, right?" "There used to be a group of bandits here who robbed people. Later, they all moved to a place where no one could find them," Li Shen said indifferently. The middle-aged man smiled and said,"It seems that even the bandits don't want to be neighbors with you." Li Shen was used to the middle-aged man's mockery. If he really got up that day…Li Shen was not used to it. Li Shen did not have many friends who could joke with him without making him angry. He was the only one. "When will you start practicing?" asked Li Shen. We've known each other for more than ten years, but you haven't changed at all. You're still as annoying as ever." The middle-aged man laughed and said," I can't change it. It's easy to change mountains and rivers, but it's hard to change one's nature. I might not be able to change even in my coffin." Li Shen agreed with the middle-aged man's words. If he really changed, then there would be one less interesting " bastard " in the martial arts world. That would be too boring. "Did you discover anything when you went to Rui Lin Manor?" Li Shen asked. Who did this?" The middle-aged man said seriously," When I got there, the entire manor was in a sea of fire. The fire burned for a day and a night. It was only when it rained heavily in the early morning that the fire was extinguished. Everything in the manor was turned into scorched earth. Many of the people inside were charred. I couldn't recognize their faces." As he spoke, the middle-aged man's eyes revealed a touch of sadness... "In other words, we can't find any clues?" asked Li Shen. "Not really, because I didn't find that person's body among the dead bodies," said the middle-aged man. "Who is it?" asked Li Shen. The middle-aged man replied,"Rui Lin Villa, Vice Head of Guard Zhang Biao." "Are you suspecting that he did it?" asked Li Shen. The middle-aged man said,"He doesn't have that ability. Even if he tied up five Zhang Biaos, he wouldn't be Fu Yuheng's opponent. But I suspect that he was the one who let those people into the villa." "Oh?" Li Shen asked,"Where did you see that?" Even if he didn't die in the villa, he could have died somewhere else. It might have been burnt. Didn't you recognize it?" "Impossible!" the middle-aged man said. When I searched Green Peace Mountain for Tian Lin, I couldn't find Zhang Biao's body or corpse. Moreover, Zhang Biao was known as a one-legged tiger in the martial world. His left leg was broken. It was the head of the Godly Axe Sect, Zuo Qian, who helped him install a mechanical leg. That was why he could walk like an ordinary person. Therefore, if he was burnt, it would be easy to recognize him." "Even if we didn't find his body, why would you suspect that he was the one who let her in?" asked Li Shen.

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2024-09-13 23:10

Writing a novel required a good story structure, character creation, and plot development. In the first chapter, you can introduce the protagonist's background and personality to make the readers interested in him. At the same time, he could describe some scenes and environments to increase the reader's sense of immersion. In terms of the plot, some initial events of the protagonist could be introduced, such as discovering that there was a problem with his identity or encountering some mysterious characters to lead the story forward. At the same time, there could be some suspense or tense scenes to attract the reader's interest, such as the protagonist being kidnapped or encountering dangerous situations. In terms of character creation, it could introduce the protagonist's personality and background to give the reader an impression of him. At the same time, there could be some villains to increase the complexity of the story and let the readers guess the ending of the story. Finally, pay attention to the rhythm and tension of the story to maintain a certain sense of tension. At the same time, don't let the story be too long and make the reader feel bored.

Everyone, take a look at my novel and give me some advice on writing a novel

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2024-09-19 02:19

There is still a lot of room for improvement in the novel, but you can refer to the following suggestions for improvement: 1. Decide on the theme and plot of the story. A good novel should have a clear theme and plot that the reader can understand and resonate with. 2. Create an attractive character image. A good novel should have a vivid and three-dimensional character image that the reader could like and appreciate. 3. Grasp the rhythm of narration. A good novel should have a good narrative rhythm so that the reader can follow the development of the story and understand it. 4. Use appropriate language. A good novel should use appropriate language and style so that the reader can feel the emotions and atmosphere of the story. 5. Master the narrative perspective. A good novel should use an appropriate narrative point of view so that readers can better understand the plot and characters.

Give me some advice on writing a novel

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2025-03-03 23:45

Writing a novel was a challenging activity that required constant trial and error. Here are some suggestions for writing a novel: 1. Decide on the theme and plot of the story. This will help you come up with the structure of the story, determine the setting of the characters and scenes, and the way to move the story forward. 2. Create interesting characters. The characters in the novel were very important. They should have their own personalities, backgrounds, and goals. You need to make them real and interesting so that the readers can resonate with them. 3. Maintain the continuity of the plot. The cohesiveness of the plot was very important when writing a novel. You need to ensure that the actions and decisions of the characters are consistent with the development of the plot so that the reader feels that the story is logical. Use conflict to attract the reader's attention. Conflict is one of the most common elements in novels. It can attract the attention of readers and make them want to know more. 5. Pay attention to details and descriptions. The details in a novel are very important. They allow the reader to better understand the characters and plot. You need to focus on the description to let the reader feel the atmosphere and emotions of the scene. 6. Continuous modification and improvement. Writing a novel was an activity that required constant revision and improvement. You need to read and revise the work over and over again to make sure that it has no typos or grammar errors and is logical. I hope these suggestions will help you write an excellent novel.

Give me some advice on writing a novel

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2024-09-09 01:08

Writing a novel is a very interesting activity, but it also requires a lot of time and energy. Before you start writing, you can consider the following suggestions: 1. Decide on the theme and plot of the story: Before you start writing, you need to determine the theme and plot of the story. This would help to build the framework of the story and ensure that the direction of the story was correct. 2. Create interesting characters: The characters in the novel are the soul of the story. He needed to create interesting, three-dimensional, and deep characters so that the readers could truly immerse themselves in the story. 3. Use a rich imagination: Imagination is an important factor in writing novels. He needed to use his rich imagination to create unique storylines and characters. 4. Pay attention to the cohesiveness and logic of the plot: The cohesiveness and logic of the plot are important features of the novel. He needed to ensure the cohesiveness and logic of the story to avoid any loopholes. Pay attention to the use of language: Language is an important part of the novel. It is necessary to pay attention to the use of language to make the language vivid, vivid and infectious. 6. Continuous revision and improvement: Writing is an activity that requires constant revision and improvement. He needed to constantly revise and improve the novel until he was satisfied. I hope the above suggestions will be helpful. I wish you a happy writing!

Please give me some advice on how to write a novel, thank you (This is my first time writing)

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2024-09-13 03:17

There were a few points to note when writing a novel: 1. Decide on the theme and plot of the story. This can help you build an attractive and logical story. 2. Create interesting characters. Every character should have their own background, personality, and goals. Their actions and conversations should be real and interesting. 3. Use appropriate narrative techniques. For example, describing the scene, creating characters, using dialogue and actions, and so on. 4. Keep the story coherent and smooth. Try to avoid logical errors and contradictions. 5. Pay attention to details and create an atmosphere. The details can help the reader understand the story better and help you create a fascinating world. I hope these suggestions will be helpful to you. I wish you an excellent novel!

Can I write my novel like this? Everyone, give me some advice.

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2024-09-13 09:07

There were a few points to note when writing a novel: 1. Decide on the theme and plot of the story and develop the story around these elements. 2. Create characters so that they have distinct personalities and motives so that readers can like them and follow the story. 3. Use appropriate narrative techniques such as description, dialogue, conflict, and twists to make the story more interesting. 4. Maintain the cohesiveness and logic of the story, avoid contradictions and irrationality, and make the reader convinced by the narrative. Based on the above points, we can further improve the plot and character creation of the novel, try different narrative techniques to improve the quality of the novel.

Everyone, please help me take a look at this opening and give me some suggestions. This is my first time writing a novel.

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2024-09-11 06:02

When you hear this word, your target has already appeared. He was wearing a warm robe to face you. His eyes were filled with endless worry and unease. He didn't miss this beginning, but he needed to go further. You could see in his eyes that there was something else added to his worry and uneasiness. For example, you could see from his eyes that his soul was expanding or that he felt a powerful shadow approaching him. In the second half of this opening, you can describe your target in more depth and further describe his emotional changes. For example, you can turn his sorrow into anxiety or his shadow into fanaticism. This way, you can learn more emotional elements from your target character and improve the sense of immersion in your novel. In general, you can continue to develop this opening, but you need to make your words and descriptions more in-depth and improve your sense of immersion. If you need any more suggestions, please let me know.

I have the first chapter of a novel. I hope everyone can give me some opinions and see if it's attractive!

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2024-09-06 20:31

The first chapter is very important to attract the reader's attention and establish the foundation of the story. Here are some suggestions that might be useful: The beginning should be fascinating. Use some suspense, tension, or exciting scenes to attract the reader's interest. For example," A pair of eyes stared at him in the dark. He didn't know what it was, but he felt a chill coming from his body." 2. Introduce the protagonist. The first chapter introduced the identity, background, and personality of the protagonist so that the readers could understand the characteristics and motives of the protagonist. For example," Li Yun is a young university student from an ordinary family. He has always wanted to be an outstanding person." 3. Set the suspense. In the first chapter, some suspense could be used to attract the reader's interest. For example," He doesn't know what it is, but he feels a chill coming from his body " would make the reader want to continue reading to find out more. 4. Build the foundation of the story. In the first chapter, the reader should understand the background and theme of the story, as well as the motives and goals of the protagonist. For example," Li Yun is a young university student, he comes from an ordinary family, and he has always wanted to be an outstanding person." This information would allow the reader to understand the protagonist's background and goals. I hope these suggestions will be helpful. I hope the first chapter of the novel can attract the attention of the readers!

Can the novel continue? Give me some advice ~

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2024-09-03 15:54

Of course, the novel could continue. As long as the plot was attractive and the story had room for development, readers would be willing to continue reading. The following points can be considered in the process of writing to improve the readers 'reading ability: Create attractive characters: Each character has a unique personality and background story that allows the reader to understand them in depth and resonate with them. 2. Create an interesting plot: The plot should be interesting and fascinating. You can set up suspense to introduce new characters and backgrounds to increase the complexity of the plot. 3. Use appropriate narrative techniques: For example, using flashbacks, interjection, and other techniques can help readers better understand the plot and characters. Maintain the cohesiveness and integrity of the story: The story should have a clear structure and a coherent plot to avoid contradictions or breaks in the plot. 5. Increase details and descriptions: Details and descriptions can increase the realism and liveliness of the novel, allowing readers to better feel the plot and the atmosphere of the characters. I hope the above points will be helpful. I wish you a smooth journey in your novel writing!

I want to write a novel. Everyone, please give me some advice or ideas on how to write a novel.

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2024-09-17 02:12

Writing a novel requires constant practice and exploration. Here are some methods and suggestions for writing a novel: 1. Decide on the theme and plot of the story: Before you start writing, you need to determine the theme and plot of the story to determine the core and direction of the story. This helps to maintain a sense of unity and avoid getting lost in the process. 2. Outlining: An outline can help you organize the structure of the story, determine the main plot and characters, and set the background and worldview of the story. Making an outline helps to keep your thoughts clear during the writing process. Creating interesting characters: Good character creation is the key to successful writing. You need to create a unique personality and background story for your characters so that they can resonate and emotionally engage the readers. 4. Use dialogue and description: dialogue and description are important components of a novel, allowing readers to better understand the story and characters. You need to use dialogue and description to shape the characters and plot as much as possible so that the reader can better feel the atmosphere and emotions of the story. Pay attention to details and rhythm: Details and rhythm are one of the keys to the success of a novel. You need to pay attention to the details of the story so that the reader can better feel the authenticity and emotion of the story. At the same time, you need to master the rhythm so that the plot and characters can develop naturally. 6. Continuous revision and improvement: Writing is a process that requires constant revision and improvement. You need to repeatedly check the plot and the characters to make sure they develop naturally, and you need to constantly refine the language and style of the novel. I hope the above suggestions will be helpful. I wish you a happy writing!

I've written a little novel, but it's just the beginning. I hope everyone can give me some advice and see if it's necessary to continue writing.

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2024-09-11 01:38

The beginning of a novel was very important. It could attract the attention of the readers and make them want to continue reading. If you want more suggestions, you can provide more details so that I can better understand your novel.