Everyone, please help me take a look at this opening and give me some suggestions. This is my first time writing a novel.
When you hear this word, your target has already appeared. He was wearing a warm robe to face you. His eyes were filled with endless worry and unease. He didn't miss this beginning, but he needed to go further. You could see in his eyes that there was something else added to his worry and uneasiness. For example, you could see from his eyes that his soul was expanding or that he felt a powerful shadow approaching him. In the second half of this opening, you can describe your target in more depth and further describe his emotional changes. For example, you can turn his sorrow into anxiety or his shadow into fanaticism. This way, you can learn more emotional elements from your target character and improve the sense of immersion in your novel. In general, you can continue to develop this opening, but you need to make your words and descriptions more in-depth and improve your sense of immersion. If you need any more suggestions, please let me know.
Everyone, take a look at my novel and give me some advice on writing a novel
There is still a lot of room for improvement in the novel, but you can refer to the following suggestions for improvement: 1. Decide on the theme and plot of the story. A good novel should have a clear theme and plot that the reader can understand and resonate with. 2. Create an attractive character image. A good novel should have a vivid and three-dimensional character image that the reader could like and appreciate. 3. Grasp the rhythm of narration. A good novel should have a good narrative rhythm so that the reader can follow the development of the story and understand it. 4. Use appropriate language. A good novel should use appropriate language and style so that the reader can feel the emotions and atmosphere of the story. 5. Master the narrative perspective. A good novel should use an appropriate narrative point of view so that readers can better understand the plot and characters.
Everyone, please help me take a look at the "Lily" that I wrote and give me your opinions.
An example of his feelings after reading Lily is as follows: " Lily " was a novel that described the growth of young girls, family and love. The plot was compact, the characters were vivid, and the language was beautiful. I was deeply interested in this book and spent a lot of time reading it. In this book, I felt the author's deep insight into human nature and his cherishment of life. The author reveals the complexity of human nature by describing the protagonist's growth and makes people realize that everyone has their own unique character and destiny. In addition, the author also described the power of kinship and love to make readers feel the importance of kinship and love and educate readers to cherish these precious emotions. In the end, the author also painted a beautiful picture of life through beautiful language to let the readers feel the beauty of life. I think this book is a good novel worth reading. It has taught me many truths about life and made me cherish life and family more.
Please give me some suggestions for my novel…Thank you, everyone…
The suggestions and opinions for web novels can be found in the following examples: 1. Decide on the theme and plot of the story. Think about what the reader wants to know and what emotions or plot they want to experience in the novel. 2. Create attractive characters. Every reader has their own unique preferences and tastes, so make sure that each character has a unique personality and motivation that the reader can resonate with them. 3. Pay attention to writing and language. Make sure that the language of the novel is concise and clear, and that it can clearly convey the message of the story. At the same time, pay attention to description and rhetoric to enhance the readers 'reading ability and emotional resonance. 4. Pay attention to the cohesiveness and logic of the plot. Don't let the plot have contradictions or logical holes that will confuse and lose interest. 5. Create an interesting setting and background. It could create a unique world view and background for the novel to enhance the reader's interest and sense of involvement. 6. Pay attention to the rhythm and the ups and downs of the plot. The pace of the novel should be fast and powerful, and the plot should be fluctuating to enhance the reader's reading experience. 7. Keep the novel coherent and consistent. Make sure that the plot of the novel and the actions of the characters are consistent and logically coherent to avoid jumps or contradictions. 8. Pay attention to the emotional expression and the description of the character's inner activities. The reader should be able to feel the emotions and inner activities of the character to enhance the realism of the novel and resonate with the reader. I hope these suggestions will be helpful. I wish you a smooth journey in your novel creation!
Can everyone please help me take a look at the beginning of this novel?
The beginning of a web novel was very important. It could attract the attention of the readers and make them want to continue reading. A good beginning could make the novel more attractive and increase the reader's interest. There were some noteworthy points at the beginning of the novel. The beginning should be concise and clear, not too long or too complicated, so that the reader can quickly understand the background and story content of the novel. You can describe an unexpected event, an amazing scene, or an interesting plot to attract the reader's attention. The beginning should be able to arouse the curiosity of the readers and make them want to continue reading and explore more content. In general, the beginning of the novel was okay, but it still needed to be improved. If you want to improve the beginning, you can try to describe the background and plot more concisely and clearly, and attract the reader's attention through attractive scenes and plots.
I want to be a novelist, everyone give me some suggestions! Please!
Being a novelist required a high level of creativity and imagination. At the same time, it also required perseverance in writing and constantly trying out new plots and story lines. If you want to be a successful novelist, I suggest you read more excellent novels and learn their writing skills and storylines. They could also participate in writing workshops and competitions to train their writing skills and presentation skills. In addition, he had to maintain his passion and curiosity for the story and constantly create new and better works.
This is a micro-novel. Please help me take a look ~
Micro-fiction was a short and creative form of text. It usually only had dozens to hundreds of words, but it could leave a deep impression on readers through unique storylines, character creation, and language use. The following is a micro-novel I wrote: "A Chance Encounter Late at Night." The streets were silent in the middle of the night. Only the occasional sound of cars and pedestrians could be heard. Zhang Ming (male, 25 years old) was walking alone on the way home, feeling a little frustrated. At this moment, he saw a girl sitting on a bench by the roadside. She was holding a book in her hand and looked very engrossed. Zhang Ming felt that this girl was a little mysterious, so he went forward and asked: "Hello, your posture is very cute. Do you like this book?" The girl looked up and saw the confusion in his eyes. She smiled and replied,"Yes, I like this book because it allows me to see many different stories." "Why are you reading here?" Zhang Ming asked in surprise. The girl looked up with a hint of sadness in her eyes."Actually, I often come here to read books and listen to music alone. It's very peaceful here." Zhang Ming suddenly felt a little touched and asked,"If you have time, can you come home with me?" I'll give you a book." The girl looked up and nodded with a smile. But I'm going to sleep now, so I can only stay here." Zhang Ming looked at the girl's back and felt touched. He gently picked up the book in the girl's hand and walked to the bench to sit down and start reading with her. Time passed quickly, and the two of them had already read a lot of books together. Zhang Ming found that this girl was not only smart, diligent, but also had a unique temperament. He began to get to know her and found that she was a very interesting person. In the end, Zhang Ming invited the girl to go home with him. They shared their interests and thoughts and spent a wonderful night together. The next day, Zhang Ming gave the girl his favorite novel and invited her to the exhibition. The girl gladly accepted the invitation and spent an unforgettable weekend admiring the artwork together. From that day on, Zhang Ming and the girl became good friends and they spent a lot of good times together.
Everyone, give me some suggestions. Where should a newcomer go to write a novel for the first time?
It was recommended for newcomers to choose a theme and style that they were interested in and determine the basic plot and character settings of the story. Then, he would make sure that the novel was logical and coherent through repeated editing and polishing. Finally, he could seek advice from an editor or an experienced writer to help improve the quality of the novel. Writing is a process that requires patience and perseverance. Don't be afraid of failure. Believe in your own ability and work hard. In the end, you will definitely write an excellent novel.
I wrote the beginning of a novel. Everyone, help me take a look!
As night fell, the city was brightly lit. A bustling street ran through the entire city. In this bustling city, there was a mysterious corner where a mysterious organization was hidden. The members of this organization are all people with special abilities. They have extraordinary wisdom and courage. In order to pursue the secrets in their hearts, they chose to join this organization. In this organization, they continued to learn, grow, and explore the mysteries of the world. Everything they experienced was to protect the world and uphold justice.
I'm writing a novel, and there's a question that stumps me. Please help me take a look.
There was a problem that was hard to avoid when writing a novel, and that was the character setting. Character setting is a very important part of a novel because it determines the plot and character of the novel. A perfect character setting needed to include the character's age, occupation, background, personality, goals, and motivation. You need to pay attention to the following points in character setting: Age of the character: The age of the character is very important because it determines the character and experience of the character. You need to choose an appropriate age to make the character's behavior and way of thinking more realistic. Character's Class: Character's Class is also a very important aspect because it determines the character's personality and action style. You can choose an appropriate class to make your character's behavior and way of thinking more realistic. 3. Character background: The background of the character is also very important because it determines the character and experience of the character. You need to choose an appropriate background to make the character's behavior and way of thinking more realistic. Character's personality: Character's personality is the most important part of character setting. You need to choose an appropriate character to make the character's behavior and way of thinking more in line with your wishes. Character goals and motives: The character's goals and motives are also very important because they determine the character's actions and decisions. You need to choose an appropriate target to make the character's actions and decisions more reasonable. In terms of character design, you need to consider these factors in order to make the character more perfect.
Please help me take a look at the title of the book.
I'm collecting the title of the book, please help me take a look, Here are some suggestions that might be suitable for a novel title: 1 " Rebirth in the Other World " 2 The Devil's Kiss 3 Battle Through the Heavens 4 Sword Comes [5]" Full-time Expert " "Douluo Continent" 7 Battle Frenzy [Lord Snow Eagle] Chapter 9: Eternal Thought Battle God Spirit I hope this will help!