Can the novel continue? Give me some advice ~

Second Heaven
Preface ~ Profession ~ Race ~ Continent ~ Character Introduction:
Continent: This world was divided into three continents,"Heavenly Feather Continent","Clear Sky Continent" and "Soaring Heavens Continent". Every year, the fires of war would never cease in these continents. Among them, the Sky Feather Continent was slightly stronger. The Sky Feather Continent mainly had two large kingdoms, the Warcloud Empire and the Longyan Empire, as well as some insignificant small duchies. Every year, they would pay the two kingdoms accordingly to avoid being paid. Zhan Yun and Long Yan signed a non-aggression agreement 3000 years ago, so both countries were relatively prosperous and had high economic exchanges. The Clear Sky Continent was divided into two kingdoms, the Divine Wing Empire and the Beast God Empire. Unlike the Sky Feather Continent, the Clear Sky Continent did not have any small duchies. There were only two kingdoms. Every year, there would be constant disputes, but when other continents attacked their own countries, they would unanimously sign a truce agreement with the outside world, so their strength could not be underestimated. Soaring Heavens Continent only had one country, and that was the 'Devil Soul Empire'. No one had ever been willing to go to the Demon God Empire, the continent known as the darkest empire. Because they were the descendants of the devil race and after occupying the 'Soaring Heavens Continent', they had delusions of dominating the world. Of course, Soaring Heavens Continent's land area was also the smallest, not even a third of the Sky Feather Continent's.
[Race: There are many races in this world. There are four major races.] Humans. Wings Race. Beasts. Demons. There were also some races with fewer people, such as the elves. Dragon Clan. Dwarves. Blood Clan. Wait a minute. There were still many that would slowly surface in the future.
[Classes: It must be said that the classes in this book are very diverse. There are many classes, each with their own ages.] There were seven main professions: Warrior. Knight. Mage. Shadow of Calamity (It's just a Thief. Because it's too unpleasant to hear and it's a matter of professional ethics, I changed it to Shadow of Calamity. Please forgive me.) Undead. Summon. Bow and arrow. There are still many more ancient occupations to explore, hehe.
Character:
White Feather: Male. He lived in the "Battle Cloud Empire". He was an abandoned child. I grew up in an orphanage. Natural silver hair. He's a loner by nature. It's hard to say. Because of an accident, he stepped into a chaotic world.
Qi Xue: Female. The daughter of the patriarch of the four great families of the Battle Cloud Empire, Wen Yuxuan. He had a natural cold temperament. And a beautiful face. He became the favored target of the nobles. sure. That was something that would happen when he grew up.
Qi Ying, Male. Qi Xue's younger brother. A childish face. The cream of the crop among the nobles. He was known as the warrior with the most potential to date. I will listen to my sister no matter what. She relied on her sister. The two of them had a very good relationship.
Frozen Moon: Male. Descendant of the Blood Clan. Born with a blood feud. A cold endorsement. At the age of seven, he left his hometown and embarked on the path of revenge. After that... He met Bai Yu and searched for his enemy together.
Meng Tian: Male. The only elf in the elf race who did not have any magic elements in her body. However, he had an incomparable talent for archery. He was known as the most talented archer of the elves.
Ethereal: Female. I lost my father from below. He and his mother had each other. steal for a living After his mother died. Living a wandering life alone. Laughing and laughing all day. In fact, my heart is very lonely.
Han Xiao: Male. Avian. I've loved playing instruments since I was young. He was a talented man in both literature and martial arts. It was a pity that the family was framed by the dog officials, causing the family to fall. Later, he was saved by someone. Drinking and playing all day. Only when he met Meng Tian did he wake up.
Green Vine: Female The most ancient profession, the Wise One. When he was young, he lived in seclusion in the mountains all year round and cultivated hard. Then, he met Bai Yu and the others. Rather than travel the world A cute face. A sweet smile. He often messed with goods.
White Bear: Male. Beasts. Orcs. He looked very scary. There were countless wounds on his body. But she was very kind. He was often ridiculed by them as a demon on earth. He was also the spokesperson of Second Heaven.

Answer 1

Of course, the novel could continue. As long as the plot was attractive and the story had room for development, readers would be willing to continue reading. The following points can be considered in the process of writing to improve the readers 'reading ability:

Create attractive characters: Each character has a unique personality and background story that allows the reader to understand them in depth and resonate with them.

2. Create an interesting plot: The plot should be interesting and fascinating. You can set up suspense to introduce new characters and backgrounds to increase the complexity of the plot.

3. Use appropriate narrative techniques: For example, using flashbacks, interjection, and other techniques can help readers better understand the plot and characters.

Maintain the cohesiveness and integrity of the story: The story should have a clear structure and a coherent plot to avoid contradictions or breaks in the plot.

5. Increase details and descriptions: Details and descriptions can increase the realism and liveliness of the novel, allowing readers to better feel the plot and the atmosphere of the characters.

I hope the above points will be helpful. I wish you a smooth journey in your novel writing!