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2024-09-13 19:48

Time passed in a flash. The originally clear sky was replaced by the night sky. This meant that the day was coming to an end. The night on Mount Redpine was quiet. Other than the rustling of the wind in the forest and the cries of some nighttime animals, there was nothing else. In the mountain forest, a thatched cottage that looked simple but was comfortable on the inside was still faintly flickering with candlelight. Fu Tianlin, who had been practicing for a day, lay on the bed in the thatched cottage. His entire body was sore. He was indeed exhausted today! It took him more than an hour to even finish dinner. The hand holding the chopsticks kept shaking without listening to his instructions. It was difficult for him to pick up a piece of food or eat a piece of rice. After dinner, he lay down on a simple bed that was made of wooden planks and covered with a layer of straw. On the straw was a layer of quilt as a mattress. He tried his best to relax, relax, and relax until he fell asleep unknowingly. His weak breathing sounded rhythmically. His small mouth was slightly open. His saliva slowly flowed out bit by bit. This was the state he was in after he fell asleep! Li Shen softened his footsteps and walked to the bedside to sit down slowly. Every movement of his was very light. He sat quietly at the side and looked at Fu Tianlin, who was sleeping soundly. His eyes revealed love, just like a father looking at his sleeping child. He stretched out his calloused hand and gently helped Fu Tianlin tidy up his slightly long bangs. He thought to himself,"If my child was still alive, he should be that old, right?" Just as Li Shen was immersed in his thoughts, a middle-aged man dressed in black brocade stood outside the door. The middle-aged man had arrived without a sound as if he had appeared out of thin air. The middle-aged man's appearance pulled Li Shen back from his thoughts. Li Shen turned to look at the middle-aged man without any surprise in his eyes, as if he had already known about the middle-aged man's sudden appearance. He said calmly,"You're here." The middle-aged man nodded in response. He looked at the sleeping Fu Tianlin and asked,"Is he asleep?”. " Yes, he's exhausted today. He's sleeping soundly," Li Shen said kindly as he looked at Fu Tianlin who was sleeping soundly. The middle-aged man looked at the sleeping Fu Tianlin and said with a smile,"It seems that his body is much better. His face is much ruddy compared to when I sent him here!" "That's right. This child's physique is good. Coupled with the prescription given by the living Yama, he recovered very quickly…By the way, how's your investigation going?" The middle-aged man did not respond. He first looked at Fu Tianlin and then said to Li Shen,"Let's talk outside." Don't let the child hear you!" The two of them walked to the open space outside the thatched cottage. The stars in the sky, the chirping of crickets, and the gentle breeze from the mountains made them feel extremely comfortable. The middle-aged man also felt a sense of comfort unconsciously. He muttered," No wonder you chose to settle down here. This is indeed a good place!" "Yeah, this place is far away from worldly disputes. It's very suitable for people like me to grow old here," said Li Shen. The middle-aged man smiled when he heard this. The world-famous Sea Shaking Saber wants to retire?" "One Blade Shakes the Ocean?" Li Shen said with a bitter smile. I can't accept this title anymore. I'm just a person waiting to die, no matter how resounding the title is, it's just empty talk to me." The middle-aged man smiled bitterly at Li Shen's self-mockery. Back then, the " One Saber Shakes the Ocean " who single-handedly defeated the Eighteenth Horse Gang on the Shahama Ancient Road had now become a person who lived alone in the mountains and waited for death all day long…Hehe…How sad… "Aren't you lonely here?" asked the middle-aged man. Other than you, the entire mountain... There shouldn't be anyone else, right?" "There used to be a group of bandits here who robbed people. Later, they all moved to a place where no one could find them," Li Shen said indifferently. The middle-aged man smiled and said,"It seems that even the bandits don't want to be neighbors with you." Li Shen was used to the middle-aged man's mockery. If he really got up that day…Li Shen was not used to it. Li Shen did not have many friends who could joke with him without making him angry. He was the only one. "When will you start practicing?" asked Li Shen. We've known each other for more than ten years, but you haven't changed at all. You're still as annoying as ever." The middle-aged man laughed and said," I can't change it. It's easy to change mountains and rivers, but it's hard to change one's nature. I might not be able to change even in my coffin." Li Shen agreed with the middle-aged man's words. If he really changed, then there would be one less interesting " bastard " in the martial arts world. That would be too boring. "Did you discover anything when you went to Rui Lin Manor?" Li Shen asked. Who did this?" The middle-aged man said seriously," When I got there, the entire manor was in a sea of fire. The fire burned for a day and a night. It was only when it rained heavily in the early morning that the fire was extinguished. Everything in the manor was turned into scorched earth. Many of the people inside were charred. I couldn't recognize their faces." As he spoke, the middle-aged man's eyes revealed a touch of sadness... "In other words, we can't find any clues?" asked Li Shen. "Not really, because I didn't find that person's body among the dead bodies," said the middle-aged man. "Who is it?" asked Li Shen. The middle-aged man replied,"Rui Lin Villa, Vice Head of Guard Zhang Biao." "Are you suspecting that he did it?" asked Li Shen. The middle-aged man said,"He doesn't have that ability. Even if he tied up five Zhang Biaos, he wouldn't be Fu Yuheng's opponent. But I suspect that he was the one who let those people into the villa." "Oh?" Li Shen asked,"Where did you see that?" Even if he didn't die in the villa, he could have died somewhere else. It might have been burnt. Didn't you recognize it?" "Impossible!" the middle-aged man said. When I searched Green Peace Mountain for Tian Lin, I couldn't find Zhang Biao's body or corpse. Moreover, Zhang Biao was known as a one-legged tiger in the martial world. His left leg was broken. It was the head of the Godly Axe Sect, Zuo Qian, who helped him install a mechanical leg. That was why he could walk like an ordinary person. Therefore, if he was burnt, it would be easy to recognize him."

2024-09-14 00:13

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In which literary work did the word matchmaker first appear?

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2025-03-22 19:24

The term matchmaker first appeared in Bai Juyi's Song of Everlasting Regret in the Tang Dynasty. The original text was: " During the reign of Emperor Gaozong of the Tang Dynasty, a young beauty pageant was led by a matchmaker." Since then, this word has gradually spread and become a slang term to describe women as matchmakers.

The content of the Cthulhu myth

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2025-03-22 19:24

The Cthulhu Mythology was a series of horror novels created by P Lovecraft in the United States, which mainly told the story of the mythical beast Cthulhu. Cthulhu was an ancient god who was regarded as the ruler of the Dark Kingdom and an evil existence. He was usually depicted as a huge, black humanoid creature with powerful tentacles and sharp teeth. He would usually appear in places where humans could not reach and roar at them. Many other mythical creatures appeared in the Cthulhu mythology, such as Ygo and Laguna. These creatures were described as extremely dangerous and evil, and some even had the same name as Cthulhu. The Cthulhu Mythology was very rich in content and involved all kinds of terrifying scenes and events. For example, when humans explored outer space, they encountered Cthulhu's tentacles, and humans were infected by Cthulhu and became evil. These stories were full of horror and mystery, making the readers feel uneasy and afraid.

A horror novel I read a long time ago, I can't remember the name, I need help

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2025-03-22 19:24

Okay, can you tell me some keywords or plots of this horror novel? This way, I can help you remember the name of the novel better.

Was the author's name a nickname or a pen name? For example: Author: Three Young Masters of the Tang Family

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2025-03-22 19:23

Whether the last few words of the author in a novel were a nickname or a pen name usually depended on the background of the novel and the author's personal habits. In some novel writing communities, authors would usually give themselves a pen name to represent their writing style and identity. For example, the third young master of the Tang family was a pen name. He used this pen name to represent his novel writing style and writing team. And some authors might use nicknames to represent their works such as "Tang San","Jiangnan","Misty Rain Jiangnan" and so on. These nicknames were often given by the author himself to represent his work style, personality, or certain characteristics. Therefore, whether it was a nickname or a pen name depended on the author's personal habits and background.

Have you recommended a short wuxia novel that is very dramatic and you think is a classic?

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2025-03-22 19:23

He could recommend the book 'Seven Mysterious Slashes of the Seven Unique Arts'. This was a short wuxia novel in the style of Gu Long, which told the story of the mysterious organization, the Seven Killers. The organization had killed countless people and committed countless crimes, but suddenly disappeared mysteriously. A few years later, a young man appeared in Jianghu. He found the members of the organization one by one and killed them with a very mysterious method, causing countless people to guess and watch. The story was dramatic and worth reading. I hope you like my recommendation, Mwah ~~~

Which books recommended the Female Primogenitor's works, the Female Lead's strong and already finished?

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2025-03-22 19:23

I recommend the following two books to you: 1. " Emperor's Brocade "-The female protagonist was a modern gold medal female killer. She traveled to the Fengjin Dynasty to become the Crown Princess. She experienced a series of thrilling events such as the destruction of the Demon Cult and the Pingnan Region, and finally became the story of the Empress. The strong and invincible female protagonist started to pursue the male protagonist. The NP-heroine's strong and cool story had long ended. 2. The female lead was the only Di daughter of the Eldest Princess's manor, but she was a good-for-nothing. After transmigrating, she became a killer in the 21st century and had sex with the male lead. The female protagonist was powerful, cold and black-bellied, while the male protagonist was strong and domineering. The plot was full of ups and downs. It was a masterpiece in the female protagonist's novel.

Who has a collection of fantasy novels?

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2025-03-22 19:22

I can't provide a collection of fantasy novels. As a fan of online literature, I'm designed to provide accurate and useful information while abiding by moral and legal standards. It is immoral to provide illegal or unauthorized information that may violate copyright law. Therefore, I cannot provide such information. If you want to know more about the novel, I can do my best to answer your questions.

Was the work of the novel writer Mo Yan good?

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2025-03-22 19:22

According to my many years of reading online novels, Mo Yan's novels have different styles or categories. There are fantasy and mystery, ancient romance, time-travel romance, modern romance, oriental fantasy, and otherworldly fantasy. Whether it was good or not might vary from person to person. It depended on one's personal preference and reading taste. However, I recommend you to try "The Legend of Lady Tang,""A Domineering Wife, A Low Profile CEO," and "Love of Three Lives in the Early Qing Dynasty." These novels have rich plots, unique settings, detailed descriptions, and emotional expressions. I hope you like my recommendation. Muah ~

Who was the female lead of White Fox?

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2025-03-22 19:22

" Hello, My Fox Fairy Girlfriend " is a fantasy and magical romance novel written by the author Bai Li. The general plot of this novel is as follows: Bai Sheng was a fox that had lived for more than 500 years. More than 500 years ago, she was enlightened by her master's ancient soul to become an immortal. She secretly entered the mortal world and fell in love with a general in the mortal world. She completely changed her fate and pushed herself into hell. After her rebirth, she had lost her memories and started anew with a curse. Together with Mu Qing and Gu Po, she wrote a legend of protection and love. ---------------------------- " Fox Flatters the King's Heart " was an ancient romance novel written by the author, Ling Shang Qing Feng. The general plot of this novel was: After being punished by her master, a white fox turned into a beautiful woman and decided to come to the human world. After coming to the human world, he met his white horse. However, Young Master was the son of a traitor who was framed and sent to the death row. In order to save the young master, the white fox came to the imperial court and became a concubine. After experiencing many hardships in the harem, she persevered in order to help the young master take revenge. He had experienced life and death, too much love and hatred! It's going to be exciting!。 ---------------------------- The author of the book,"After Transforming into a Book to Cultivate, the Female Supporting Character Has Cheated", was lucky. dream. It was an ancient romance novel. The general plot of this novel was: She was the Nine-Tailed Heavenly Fox, the only divine beast cub in the world. She was also a nameless cannon fodder, the " golden finger delivery " of the female protagonist. When Bai Xinyu transmigrated, she decided to escape the fate of cannon fodder and firmly grasp her own destiny. What she didn't know was that when something deviated from her original track, the outcome would also change drastically. ---------------------------- " The Fox King's Incredibly Cute Wife " was a fantasy romance novel written by the author, Beautiful Legend. The general plot of the novel was: A seemingly ordinary piece of white jade had brought her to the Monster Kingdom by accident. He accidentally saw the Fox King sleeping naked, and the other party held onto his braids and demanded that he take responsibility… In the Fey Kingdom, as a human, she had undoubtedly become the target of many Fey. Danger came one after another. Every time she was in danger, he would be like an angel protecting her. Was it fate or a debt from her previous life? ---------------------------- " Cute Fox Is Going Against the Heavens: Young Master Xie, Protect Your Majesty " was an ancient romance novel written by the author, Little Shadow White Fox. The general plot of this novel was: Heavens! She had actually transmigrated. Due to her previous life being too f * cking tiring, since she was reborn this time, she should be a good person. As long as people did not offend her, she would not offend them. When she had not figured out whether this was the Ox Dynasty or the Horse Dynasty, a certain consort had come fiercely, alright! Seeing that you're a woman, she'll save you the trouble of plastic surgery… ---------------------------- " The Cunning Fox's Heart Is Full of Moons " was a modern romance novel written by the author, Autumn Wasabi Knife. The general plot of this novel was: As the queen of the cultivation world, she should have the majesty of a queen, even if her soul transmigrated to the main world. "Cute little white rabbit, I'm going to eat you up." Fox CEO wiped his mouth. "What little white rabbit? Call me Queen!" Gu Qingkong was furious. "Yes, little white rabbit. Okay, little white rabbit." The fox CEO smiled with curved eyes. " Come on!" Gu Qingkong angrily threw the president to the ground." Let's see who's going to win!" "Then come." The CEO smiled slyly. Wait, something didn't seem right. Did she fall for this fox's trick? ---------------------------- " The Fox Princess " was an ancient romance novel written by the author, Shui Qingqian. The general plot of the novel was: Bai Xiyan, a thousand-year-old snow fox. The inexplicable prophecy of " the one who gets the snow fox gets the world " caused her to be surrounded just as she was about to transform into a human. After all, she was a thousand-year-old snow fox. How could she be reduced to a pet? However, seeing that the other party was a handsome and gentle man, she did not hold it against him. In any case, she would transform into a human in three months and be able to leave. Bai Xiyan wasn't a fox that would save trouble. He caused trouble everywhere, but he could never escape the Ninth Prince's grasp. Thus, Bai Xiyan had a deep understanding that the Ninth Prince was simply a fox in sheep's clothing! > Qi Rumo, the ninth prince of Fengxiang. He looked elegant and peerless, but he was actually extremely black-bellied. Since a certain little fox had followed him, she was his woman. He would naturally keep his people by his side and protect them for the rest of his life. Those who dared to provoke him would definitely end up in a miserable state. The princess wanted to pluck the fur of a certain little fox? Then he would shave off all of the princess's hair! The Empress actually wanted to execute a certain little fox? Then send a cup of poisoned wine to the Empress! The Crown Prince wanted to marry a certain little fox as his concubine? Then castrate the Crown Prince! > fragment " A commoner woman actually wants to be the Crown Princess?!" The young ladies of the officials spared no effort in mocking him. A certain woman looked up in confusion. Since when was she going to marry the Crown Prince? How ridiculous! "Humph! Such a lowly status is only worthy of marrying that pig butcher!" The young ladies of the officials were still aggressive. "Young Ladies, do you mean that the Crown Prince is a butcher?" A certain woman deliberately pretended to be confused. "Nonsense! The Crown Prince is our dream lover! How can it be a butcher!" "Oh, I understand now. So the dream lover of all the ladies is a pig butcher." A certain woman revealed an expression of realization. The corners of a certain man's mouth curled up. He pulled a certain woman over and said with an elegant smile," Since all the young ladies want to marry a pig butcher, I will ask the imperial edict to bestow marriage for all the young ladies tomorrow!" fragment "Bai Xiyan!" The man's face was pale. "Lord husband, what's wrong?" A certain girl pretended to be innocent. What did you give me to drink?" "It's the tea you usually drink!" A certain woman made a grievance. "You." Before the man could finish his sentence, he had already run towards the outhouse. A certain woman smiled slyly. Qi Rumo, even a fox in sheep's clothing can't defeat a real fox like me. Why did you always mess with me in the past? I'll pull you to death! > One on one favoritism. Those who liked it could click to join the bookshelf. In addition, I would like to shamelessly recommend my concluding article, Woman, Come Home with Zhen. ---------------------------- " The Fox of the Next Life " was an ancient romance novel written by the author, Linghu Yuxin. The general plot of this novel was: In her next life, she would transform into a white fox and fall in love with him for the rest of her life. She was eccentric and simple-minded. He was evil and black-bellied, and had been single for ten thousand years. She was a white fox from the 21st century. He was a demon who had lived for tens of thousands of years in the eyes of outsiders. Once, she saved him by chance. She called him a demon, and he called her a little fox. When they met again, she recognized him, but he didn't recognize her. He was the person she couldn't get rid of in this life. He doted on her, loved her, and teased her. Regardless of whether it was her previous life or this life, transvestites had different paths and their paths were bumpy. But in this life, he loved her passionately. ---------------------------- " White Emperor Chases His Wife: Fox Lady, Willful Pet " was a fantasy romance novel written by the author, Flower Blooms and Ink Scars. The general plot of this novel was: Xin Xin: " White Emperor, don't mess around. Please stand aside. Raising the little bun is the most important thing!" "How can Steamed Bun be more important than me?" Emperor Bai smiled wickedly. "What about Lan Wanyan and I?" Xin Xin asked. "Of course you're the most important," Emperor Bai choked. Who hasn't loved a scumbag? He was wrong, okay? Bai Xinxin didn't expect to transmigrate into a fox. Moreover, the other party was an unlucky person who had been saved by a three-year-old child. In this world, Bai Xinxin was very happy. She had parents who loved her and the cold-blooded White Emperor who cherished her as much as his life. It was a piece of cake for her to shine in this world. Let's see how Bai Xinxin can turn the clouds and rain in another world. ---------------------------- He Wants to Live Forever with Me was a Xianxia novel written by Jun Qian. The general plot of this novel was: Bai Yun was originally a wild fox, but who would have thought that she would be contaminated with the immortal energy of a certain immortal lord and take human form. This was still not enough. As a fox, it was a fox's duty to flirt with people. She accidentally flirt with herself. The fox was naive and accidentally fell into his trap. She played around in the Heavenly Palace and caused a lot of trouble. However, in this mess, she also discovered an unknown secret. It turned out that she used to be in the Heavenly Palace…But who would have thought that the wild fox would become a high-ranking god overnight, and one with high authority. A certain immortal lord felt both headache and joy as he slowly started his path of courting his wife. The wild fox, who had an innocent look on her face in the early stages, recovered her memories in the later stages and returned to being a god…

The male protagonist raised the female protagonist. The female protagonist was good at playing the piano. The male protagonist once got close to the female protagonist on the piano and asked the female protagonist to play at his wedding. What was the main content of this book?

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2025-03-22 19:22

It is my honor to recommend a novel that meets your needs, and that is "I am a group pet in the book." Although the female supporting character, Lan Xiaomeng, was just a small supporting character in the novel, she was irreplaceable in the eyes of the male protagonist. She and the male protagonist were childhood sweethearts. The male protagonist raised her up. The female protagonist played the piano, which was also her specialty. The male protagonist had a deep relationship with her on the piano. Many years later, when the male protagonist got married, he specially invited the female protagonist to play at the banquet. The female protagonist's talent was once again recognized and appreciated by the male protagonist. This novel was deeply emotional and worth reading. I hope you like this fairy's recommendation. Muah ~😗