Hello! Author-san is here with a shameless 5-star review. Now that’s out of the way, I would ask y’all to treat this novel as a community project, haha. If you have any suggestions, ideas, or questions please comment them below. I’ll answer all of you as soon as I can. Also, your input matters to the story. From time to time, I’ll leave the readers (yes, YOU!) to decide the direction the story will head toward, to make the story a bit more interactive. Your comments and votes matter! In due time, I’ll reveal more about it. But that’s all I have to say for now. As always, thanks for all the love and support!
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LIKEI started reading and this is my opinion, the protagonist always depending on others even with such a strong ability makes the story a bit boring, and I have the impression that the protagonist will forgive his sister and family even after everything, if that happens I will definitely drop it. It is sad to see a work with so much potential be ruined, my advice is, make the protagonist independent of the help of others, and complete the revenge against EVERYONE who ended his life, including his sister, mother, father, teachers and colleagues, "forgiveness is not an option, revenge to be able to move on is the way."
Of course, everything I said is valid until the end of the free chapters, I didn't read after that, but I see potential in this work, but I'm afraid it will continue the way it's been going so far.
Emanuel_Heinz:I started reading and this is my opinion, the protagonist always depending on others even with such a strong ability makes the story a bit boring, and I have the impression that the protagonist will forgive his sister and family even after everything, if that happens I will definitely drop it. It is sad to see a work with so much potential be ruined, my advice is, make the protagonist independent of the help of others, and complete the revenge against EVERYONE who ended his life, including his sister, mother, father, teachers and colleagues, "forgiveness is not an option, revenge to be able to move on is the way."