Dozer_2600

TFTC.

After reading the last chapter i can see a problem with realism. The patriarch of any renowned family shouldn't be so quick to jump to a conclusion if it's not incompetent, and should ask for more evidence and clues. If I were the patriarch of the family i for sure had in mind that someone might want to sow discord between two familys knowing that war between them will weaken them, and they have a history of hate for each other, so it is an easy job. Yeah, you might want to keep up appearances and warn them because of MC words, but you will for sure not sever the relationship between families bcs of that if you do not have a clear view of the situation. Secondly, in most elite groups of people, if you are using physical force in public, even in anger, it's viewed negatively, and he, as head of the family shoudl have more self-control if he is not incompetent. Thirdly, elites have many people who serve them, so even if they are young and opurtunist they should ask or call their underlings to do searching. Well, you maybe want them to look like incompetents, if not, you need to improve on looking from the perspective of someone more calm-minded, because many people in positions of power are not so simple-minded and would see a scheme from a mile away. The only option that I can think of that is logical here is that the patriarch was acting, and he was looking for justification to break his relationship and destroy the other family, or wanted to fool MC because he knew that he was scheming against their two families, and he was only acting in such an exaggerated way to convince him. TFTC.

Not asking about his daughter?

TFTC.

Interesting start so far, we will see how it will be later. TFTC.

Tftc.

"Evolution has a destination. Not to combat nature, but to supersede it. The final, glorious evolution." -Viktor, LOL *************************************************** I'm only Arcane/LoL knowing person here?

Tftc.

I read this novel up to 700 chapters, and it's a marvelous novel, has interesting word building and great character development. Some side characters are back, even mentioned, and are not forgotten after 500 chapters; they have their own redemption threads and character development. The FLs have personalities and their own stories, and they aren't just vases at the MC's home. The power system is interesting, and I see it for the first time made that way. But there are quite a few minuses: Bad grammar, Too Fast tempo, not very deep word building, and Lack of detail and hasty ending of the book. So why am I giving it 5 stars? I'm giving 5 stars because I enjoyed reading this whole book and MC's journey, and the author's pleas reveal the last few chapters from privileged chapters, pls.

Tftc.