I could only read to 3rd chapter. The mc actions are really weird, he first kills Vhagar, causing the death of Aegon then he helps Aemond escape. If you wanted both sides to weaken just wait until the end of the Dance. Or atleat give us the thought process of the mc.

Honestly loved the concept and the execution, Great story so far keep it up author-san [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Very creative Idea that is surprisingly barely explored despite how popular both Universes are. Now onto the review: Writing Quality: 4.0 Writing Quality is decent, but there is still the occasional mistake here and there. A four is suitable in my opinion. Story Development: 3.0 The MC is unsure of what he desires and rather impulsive leading to drastically switching sides. The story is currently developing his romantic relationships but it's obvious he is simply doing things because the Author wants too, not because of his character which is a bit forced in my opinion. The author doesn't seem to know what to do with him. Three is generous enough for now. Character design: 2.0 He switches sides for no apparent reason on his whim alone. And it's not a small thing, He goes from killing Vhagar for Rhaenyra to saving her enemy when he is about to be executed and working for him. Why? What's the point? That isn't exactly explored very well and also part of the reason the story development is so low. Updating stability: 2.0 He hasn't updated in 22 days as of this review and only has 14 chapters out. World background: 5.0 Not much up for debate here, it's set in ASOIAF during the time of the dance of dragons. So if you are looking for daenerys or Jon or anything that takes place during 270-310 AC then your not in the right place... Not yet at least.

Amazing simply amazing 👍👍👍👍👍.

Great fanfic was expecting more casual read but now I’m hooked and can’t wait for more😁

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5 stars, because there are no chapters that tell about the birth or contain the MC's meeting with the gods, because it's cringe.

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I enjoyed a crab’s tale and the difference between the two is that, Mc in this along with being ruthless has true strength to back it up. He has a devilish mind and a great vision to make the greens and blacks destroy themselves to then become the King of Westeros. I like it.