Very creative Idea that is surprisingly barely explored despite how popular both Universes are. Now onto the review: Writing Quality: 4.0 Writing Quality is decent, but there is still the occasional mistake here and there. A four is suitable in my opinion. Story Development: 3.0 The MC is unsure of what he desires and rather impulsive leading to drastically switching sides. The story is currently developing his romantic relationships but it's obvious he is simply doing things because the Author wants too, not because of his character which is a bit forced in my opinion. The author doesn't seem to know what to do with him. Three is generous enough for now. Character design: 2.0 He switches sides for no apparent reason on his whim alone. And it's not a small thing, He goes from killing Vhagar for Rhaenyra to saving her enemy when he is about to be executed and working for him. Why? What's the point? That isn't exactly explored very well and also part of the reason the story development is so low. Updating stability: 2.0 He hasn't updated in 22 days as of this review and only has 14 chapters out. World background: 5.0 Not much up for debate here, it's set in ASOIAF during the time of the dance of dragons. So if you are looking for daenerys or Jon or anything that takes place during 270-310 AC then your not in the right place... Not yet at least.
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LIKEI read till the end. Don't trust that (read til chapter 2) thingy
