Item: Legend of the Divine Archer
Rating: 4.4

JudejaydenAuthor5mth

2024-06-03 21:47

Hi shameless author here. GIVE THE book a try I am open to feedbacks. And a fun time. Love you.

Legend of the Divine Archer

Judejayden

4.9

125 Chs

Liked by 5 people

Replies16

BlankCultivatorLv4

Is this dropped?

3mth

JudejaydenAuthor

No, I lost my computer so I am rebuilding fondation materials

BlankCultivator:Is this dropped?

3mth

JudejaydenAuthor

Are You still reading? how are you liking it?

BlankCultivator:Is this dropped?

2mth

BlankCultivatorLv4

Yeah, I’m still reading. It’s good

Judejayden:Are You still reading? how are you liking it?

2mth

hot_papichuloLv15

The synopsis caught my attention and the fact he uses bow and arrow is dope.. Imma give it a try.. I hope your story makes it big too 🙏🏾🙏🏾

2mth

JudejaydenAuthor

Thank you for the support

hot_papichulo:The synopsis caught my attention and the fact he uses bow and arrow is dope.. Imma give it a try.. I hope your story makes it big too 🙏🏾🙏🏾

2mth

MrMc_qtipLv3

Excellent truly a masterpiece Author-san

1mth

MrMc_qtipLv3

author this is simply a masterpiece please continue the art Don't give up

Judejayden:Are You still reading? how are you liking it?

1mth

JudejaydenAuthor

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H2Oz_AnxiousLv14

You should try and change the synopsis.

1mth

DavidworlorkLv14

after 4 months and still not up to 150 chapters ???????

1mth

JudejaydenAuthor

Is writing this easy?

Davidworlork:after 4 months and still not up to 150 chapters ???????

1mth

EmpyriumLv15

You should fix your grammar mistakes + improve your writing style. Lot of mistakes, most of them are small and silly ones. Writing style could better, sentences often dont make sense( forgot a "," as example) or you use words too often. Like with Pine City, you mention that name way too often. Change it, just say city or so. Be creative! Dont want to read the same 5 times in a few sentences. Last, interesting idea, like it so far. If you improve/fix your chapters I think this has a lot of potential.

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EmpyriumLv15

Edit: Why does it get worse with each chapter. Currently its a 3/10, with good grammar easily 8/10

Empyrium:You should fix your grammar mistakes + improve your writing style. Lot of mistakes, most of them are small and silly ones. Writing style could better, sentences often dont make sense( forgot a "," as example) or you use words too often. Like with Pine City, you mention that name way too often. Change it, just say city or so. Be creative! Dont want to read the same 5 times in a few sentences. Last, interesting idea, like it so far. If you improve/fix your chapters I think this has a lot of potential.

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EmpyriumLv15

Have you dropped this?

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EmpyriumLv15

Edit 2: Got better in the later chapters, 5/10 currently.

Empyrium:Edit: Why does it get worse with each chapter. Currently its a 3/10, with good grammar easily 8/10

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