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Azulia_Kitten
Azulia_KittenLv145mth
2024-05-28 03:12

So far I quite like this book. The story is fun and the system is interesting. However, these chapters quickly became riddled with lustful scenes even though the students are underage. The reasons for these inappropriate scenes are stupid and shallow. A few of these intereactions were almost pedophilic. If you are going to have scenes like this at least bother to make the characters 18, because this is just wrong, and I can’t justifiably let it go no matter how much I enjoy the book otherwise. Aside from this glaring issue, the book has been lovely so far. And although I could not reccomend this book because it goes against my moral values, I recognize that the author does have skill and seems to value the feedback of the readers. I will check back in for another update when I have read more.

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Meowder
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Hello, thank you for your honest review. I do apologize if you find the scenes inappropriate, however, I truly do not have such negative intentions. In the first hundred chapters I was more or less a newbie and was experimenting on how to keep my readers' attention as my first book failed badly. Again, I apologize if I distressed you with what I wrote and I hope for your kind and patient understanding, thank you.

Azulia_Kitten
Azulia_KittenLv14

Thank you for replying! I understand, and I am glad that you care so much. I wish you the best of luck in your future writing ventures.

Meowder:Hello, thank you for your honest review. I do apologize if you find the scenes inappropriate, however, I truly do not have such negative intentions. In the first hundred chapters I was more or less a newbie and was experimenting on how to keep my readers' attention as my first book failed badly. Again, I apologize if I distressed you with what I wrote and I hope for your kind and patient understanding, thank you.
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