Meowder

Hello, yes. He would learn to use his brains more and more, learning from both peers and enemies. This would be part of his development.

Thank you, this really warms my heart ☺️. I shall continue to write to the best of my abilities. 🫡

oh, thanks for this. Should be *but the hulking. Will edit.

Ah, no. Knees bent, right foot pointing to the side, left foot pointing forward, or vice-versa.

Only one woman will fall for him, and it will be increasingly evident as time goes by. Also, there will be a satisfactory resolution to the one who will not. Perhaps a bit bittersweet, but wouldn't break the hearts of those rooting for that woman since the beginning.

I see...thanks a lot for this valuable insight.

Nope, not yet, and not for a while longer. If it's not too much, please give me your thoughts. Do you, personally as a reader, like it better when the fml is confirmed early, or is keeping it suspenseful between candidates better? To those who are reading this. Please drop your thoughts too. I need data as reference for improvement. Thank you in advance.

I do understand, which is why I appreciate this feedback so much, as this will help me further improve my craft. To the others who are checking this, I encourage you to tell me your thoughts, too, preferably in a polite way, so I can see where my story is falling off. Feedbacks are the true only way authors like me can get in the minds of a reader without bias, after all. Thank you in advance.

Thank you for this valuable feedback. Will do better. Still struggling with pacing, but you can rest assured I'm doing my best to improve.