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Insane_Pumpkin
Insane_PumpkinLv1011mth
2023-11-25 19:54

The writing is ok but i really hate the pseudo AU where certain characters are like normal copies of their powered self. I could take it if he landed in that world with fuinjutsu/summoning accident, i could even compromise to the HOTD world not supporting chakra so he can only use taijutsu and basic mody strengthening and internal techniques that works similar to 8 gates. But i really can't take this where this pseudo Naruto loses to a baseline human in a sword fight. You took his identity as a ninja and demon holder and left him with his name and some personality traits... that's just too much.

HOTD: Surviving Uzumaki Style

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Santy_Melay
Santy_MelayLv1

Thanks for the warning.

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Gojo_God
Gojo_GodLv3

I'm not denying what you said (even thanks to you I avoided reading this), but the 8 gates use chakra, as the technique works with you opening all the main points that the chakra passes through which causes the chakra to spread body, thus increasing your physical prowess.

6mth
Insane_Pumpkin
Insane_PumpkinLv10

I know, i meant in a way where Naruto got thrown in another world in accident and still has chakra but can't use jutsu because the chalra can't get outside his body as the world is rejecting it. So he is left with internal manipulation.

Gojo_God:I'm not denying what you said (even thanks to you I avoided reading this), but the 8 gates use chakra, as the technique works with you opening all the main points that the chakra passes through which causes the chakra to spread body, thus increasing your physical prowess.
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Gojo_God
Gojo_GodLv3

thanks for clarifying. In fact, if he can only use internal energy he could still use chakra enhancement and other internal techniques, I just don't know what the point is in putting a Naruto without powers in this world, it would make more sense to make an oc

Insane_Pumpkin:I know, i meant in a way where Naruto got thrown in another world in accident and still has chakra but can't use jutsu because the chalra can't get outside his body as the world is rejecting it. So he is left with internal manipulation.
6mth
Insane_Pumpkin
Insane_PumpkinLv10

Exactly and that's the reason why i dropped it and didn't look back...

Gojo_God:thanks for clarifying. In fact, if he can only use internal energy he could still use chakra enhancement and other internal techniques, I just don't know what the point is in putting a Naruto without powers in this world, it would make more sense to make an oc
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Raptor2244
Raptor2244Lv13

So the writing is actually decent but this is basically just a rewrite of the original. Naruto is a normal kid with no abilities. There’s nothing special about him. I’m a little confused as to why the author even added him into the novel because the character doesn’t even really behave like Naruto that much. It’s basically just an additional OC with a Naruto skin so the title is a huge misnomer. If you still want to read I would recommend just pretending that naruto in this has nothing to do with the naruto you know.

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Quake_Midaro
Quake_MidaroLv14

Not sure how to feel so far it has potential but if so far Naruto seems like a basic normal person with no abilities whatsoever so this might just be a reskin of the original HOTD which it frels like it's shaping up to be I'll edit this review later depending on how things play out

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Migmartinez
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I need more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Zarek8_31_07
Zarek8_31_07Lv13

Very obviously a translation that needs work and a run through Grammarly, but still a fun read

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rares_neagu
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I love this story and hope the author keeps updating it. I like the way naruto goes through this apocalypse and i also wonder how he will grow along with everyone. I also wonder if he will have some zombie girls in his harem. I want to see more seggsi time with the girls. I really like it and keep up the good work

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Although this only has 5 chapters, it has caught my interest. And I truly hope that the author does not end up dropping this.

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