Automatic 5 Stars If this is what I hope it is.

for the use of the swastika, it is already horrible to choose this theme but the image of the swastika shows a deep disrespect or worse the absence of understanding of the history of this symbol and that this still provides to a lot of people.

my german blood is screaming do the germans proud author

I'll give it a try because I'm German myself, and it's just relatively rare that the "old" bad Germany is chosen as a theme, let's see how it works, although I hope you handle the subject responsibly and dont make fun of the Millions of deaths happened at this time in history! (I give 3 stars for now, depending on how the story is, there are more or less ...)

One of the most promising stories with good development from beginning

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Author keep writing the novel it looks very good, we have the right to remember our history and commemorate our brave ancestors. Long live to 🇩🇪 from 🇪🇸 brothers.

It is interesting, and the concept seemed good, but I wasn't a fan when they introduced gunpowder/black powder in the story. I expected it to stay true to the medieval fantasy theme. The writing quality needs some work too, with things like mixing up 'he' and 'she' and a few other small errors. Also, why is the character still 9 years old by chapter 13? It's hard to see how they can do much at that age, so I'm not sure why hes so young.