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Immortal_Duck7
Immortal_Duck7Lv41yr
2023-10-05 22:44

It is interesting, and the concept seemed good, but I wasn't a fan when they introduced gunpowder/black powder in the story. I expected it to stay true to the medieval fantasy theme. The writing quality needs some work too, with things like mixing up 'he' and 'she' and a few other small errors. Also, why is the character still 9 years old by chapter 13? It's hard to see how they can do much at that age, so I'm not sure why hes so young.

Game of Thrones: Fifth Reich

Negan_5785
4.3
44 Chs

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Negan_5785
Negan_5785Author

Relax, the gunpowder will be only for personal use in emergency cases, the army will still be medieval. The introduction of the gunpowder was just an excuse to find the gold.

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