I have decided to become shameless. It's because of readers who read the novel and left without giving this extremely beautifully written novel a review.

Is this the same MC as the manwha or a different one? Bcuz i read this manwha already still reading it actually.

really good, its just that still no there yet. timeline its all over the place ( contruct 8 houses less than 10 days , Train a army of 100+ soldies less ta 15 days , if it continue in this pace, he will construct a whole city in 30 ) < < < that without any supernatural power . the history can be refined to be really good, its just not there yet.

good so far (= reminds me of "release that witch", one of my favourite novels. it lacks a little in the details of the kingdom building and the use of his golden finger(like how does he know certain things ?cement, glassmaking,traingplan for speacial ops etc ). but for a fanfic worth a read so far.

I've been hoping for a good continuation of the story. So far, it's been quite good, although Lucas hasn't fully utilized his abilities, which I understand since it's still in the early stages. My suggestion is that Lucas should pay more attention to his people because, in my opinion, he's underutilizing them. Also, regarding his original world, I believe you could explore Lucas's story in his original world, such as learning to create something, finding a blueprint, or depicting Lucas's life back then.(translitor)

Pretty good i do hope the mc will get some seeds from earth to plant Every fruit and vegetable over time could be planted even forign plants Also if the mc can bring some of the more sturdy wood sapplings they could use that also May i give a suggjestion have the mc use poison on some of his enemys Cyanide would be interesting as i dont think that world has knollage about it Apple seeds would do wonders for it The mc could also line the streets with fruit trees and baskets bellow them to catch any fallen fruit they would be free to eat and help prevent starvation Btw the mc has not tried to bring animals to the new world yet he could bring some animals to be raised into a food sorce

I hope the buffalo girl is not in his harem. She's too dumb in the original story. ,.....,,...............,.....,,...............,.....,,...............,.....,,...............

Modernity is skillfully integrated into a fantasy world, with extremely likeable characters. Regarding supernatural forces... which maybe start apoearing when the snow melts? I suggest using dans: natural batteries corresponding to certain phenomena. Example: consuming a water and fire dan evolves your body to be able to manipulate or derive from nature fire & water, or maybe [evaporation] (not necessarily based on temperature). Or, you can make this world based on vitality. Supervitality energy starts appearing (ki) and devouring or digesting natural dans (like superbeasts or vitality crystals in their corpse or in herbs) allows you to grow your vitality & lifespan, gaining super evolutionary characteristics or even developing an exclusive 【skill】. [Throughout history, the question in pokitics has been: Who owns who? America answered it: *I own myself.]

Muy buena novela la trama va un poco lenta en general , pero aun asi es muy buena

amazing story 👏😀👏 im loving it so far. But I have mixed feeling with the update I want more chapters but I don't want it to be rushed and I know it is hard to write a story. So I will just wait and stockpile chapters. But keep going author [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]