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PowwllLv410mth
2024-04-11 18:20

really good, its just that still no there yet. timeline its all over the place ( contruct 8 houses less than 10 days , Train a army of 100+ soldies less ta 15 days , if it continue in this pace, he will construct a whole city in 30 ) < < < that without any supernatural power . the history can be refined to be really good, its just not there yet.

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Vitor_LindoLv12

Porra cara tu que seja o quer, que que essa história seja que nem o mundo real

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