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oykal_l
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2024-01-19 04:38

very good story but cant continue cause vampires and blood sucking makes me lightheaded

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GD_Cruz
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No, please continue! Vampires don't take up the whole of volume 3. XD

oykal_l
oykal_lLv15

yeah i had to skip a bit sorry but i relly like the continuation i got to the parte where liara got turned then i had to skip to the part where Divah show up again and i really like the continuation and the further developement

GD_Cruz:No, please continue! Vampires don't take up the whole of volume 3. XD
GD_Cruz
GD_CruzAuthor

well, vamps are done after Will and Liara get back to ____. 😉

oykal_l:yeah i had to skip a bit sorry but i relly like the continuation i got to the parte where liara got turned then i had to skip to the part where Divah show up again and i really like the continuation and the further developement
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Fellow_Daoist_1902
Fellow_Daoist_1902Lv4

This is a really nice novel, with writing quality that far surpasses that of the average entry on this platform. There are barely any grammatical errors, and the flow of the story is natural. Characters seem like real entities, rather than one-dimensional cardboard cutouts. The pop-culture references evoke quite a few chuckles as well, making the setup more relatable. There are a few complaints that I have as a reader, however. The protagonist's teacher, Divah, is mentioned countless times in the story and many of her quotes are used to depict Willam's thought process. A disconnect is created as we are never given a direct introduction to Divah, only picking up tidbits of information here and there from other characters. It feels like William treats her words as gospel, but to a reader there is no indication as to why her ideology holds so much weight, apart from her supposedly unmatched strength. Some elements of Willam's mentality are also worth studying, like his reaction when his oversight causes Liara to die. He may be slightly more affected by the death of another compared to his own, yet it is but a passing thought in his journey. A short- lived remorse, if I may, since there seem to be no consequences to his actions. When he is back in the past, so is she, so it is glossed over pretty quickly. Does the fact that he was responsible for the death of his companion not affect him more? If he didn't have the power to go back to the day of his death, would he have taken it so lightly? These are questions worth pondering. There are some other minor issues I personally have with this story, but overall, this is an intriguing tale that I would encourage people to read. Hoping that the locked portion of the book does not show a marked decrease in quality. I give the author my best wishes.

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