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ThesilverderpLv131yr
2023-07-11 01:25

Harem or nah? B————————————————————————>

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GD_CruzAuthor

Although there are a lot of female characters, this story is not a harem. Hope it still interests you though.

ThesilverderpLv13

Gotcha, thanks

GD_Cruz:Although there are a lot of female characters, this story is not a harem. Hope it still interests you though.
sun_imperialLv3

Nice!

GD_Cruz:Although there are a lot of female characters, this story is not a harem. Hope it still interests you though.
Gajin_SnailLv3

no harem but romance or just no romance please answer , and if there is romance is it early

GD_Cruz:Although there are a lot of female characters, this story is not a harem. Hope it still interests you though.
GD_CruzAuthor

There's romance. No harem. Romance starts off around middle of the second volume.

Gajin_Snail:no harem but romance or just no romance please answer , and if there is romance is it early
SupremeMonarchAquaLv4

Why make the FML like boys and girls? Personally it makes me less interested in her.

GD_Cruz:Although there are a lot of female characters, this story is not a harem. Hope it still interests you though.
GD_CruzAuthor

teenagers like to experiment? i think what's important is if she gets interested with Will. 😀

SupremeMonarchAqua:Why make the FML like boys and girls? Personally it makes me less interested in her.
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