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Wachdog
WachdogLv41yr
2023-03-16 05:16

I am reading 16 episodes and in general, it is entertaining to read because the author follows almost all the ideas of his readers, he also has good grammar and makes everything go well, so this is just beginning and for the future it will be a very good story.

Another Naruto (Dropped)

Zorvog
4.6
40 Chs

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Zorvog
ZorvogAuthor

Thank you dear reader.

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R0B
R0BLv2

This is exactly why you suck at writing. Never listen to your readers ideas.

Zorvog:Thank you dear reader.
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Zorvog
ZorvogAuthor

R0B:This is exactly why you suck at writing. Never listen to your readers ideas.
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Zorvog
ZorvogAuthor

Well, read and enjoy my dear readers. Also I gave myself five starts cuz why not?

1yr

VonBritannia
VonBritanniaLv14

good story. a bit concerned your trying yo make yo harem to big. think more than 4 would be to much. other than that no complants. rn its basically 9 tails, tenten, and hinita. hope tsunade is in. either way its yo choice. keep up the good work.

1yr
Lackada1sical
Lackada1sicalLv4

Evaluation: Below Average. WQ: Several gramm errors which can be improved on as the story progress. Monotonous dialogues/interaction & redundant thought process. 3/5 SD: With a slow to average pace of development and it also lacks MC & story progression since author-san decided to follow cannon/plot which is lackluster. 2/5 CD: MC is a transmigrator but his foreknowledge & adult mentality are lacking. MCs inaction to progress further by leaving the village is really lackluster and too dumb for my opinion just to follow the plot. MC is a dumb hero which is too kind for NarutoVerse. Lacks utilization of NarutoVerse foreknowledge & his earth/previous life experiences. 2/5 US: Chapters are short, stability of update matches the quality of this FF. 4/5 WB: There's nothing new as author-san decided that MC follows/observe cannon. 3/5 My opinion: Could've been better to make a new plot rather than doing the same thing as other Naruto FF. Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD

1yr
SarcasticGOD
SarcasticGODLv3

pretty good story plz dont drop and my earnest request is to post regularly.

1yr
GodOfLight
GodOfLightLv1

Evaluation: Below Average. WQ: Several gramm errors which can be improved on as the story progress. Monotonous dialogues/interaction & redundant thought process. 3/5 SD: With a slow to average pace of development and it also lacks MC & story progression since author-san decided to follow cannon/plot which is lackluster. 2/5 CD: MC is a transmigrator but his foreknowledge & adult mentality are lacking. MCs inaction to progress further by leaving the village is really lackluster and too dumb for my opinion just to follow the plot. MC is a dumb hero which is too kind for NarutoVerse. Lacks utilization of NarutoVerse foreknowledge & his earth/previous life experiences. 2/5 US: Chapters are short, stability of update matches the quality of this FF. 4/5 WB: There's nothing new as author-san decided that MC follows/observe cannon. 3/5 My opinion: Could've been better to make a new plot rather than doing the same thing as other Naruto FF. Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD

1yr
Flowerhead_Evan
Flowerhead_EvanLv4

I am really wondering right now if I am being biased or not 🤷‍♂️

1yr
_NOTE_
_NOTE_Lv2

It's overall a nice novel all Naruto fans must read it i am supporting you go on :)

1yr
Josh_Richie
Josh_RichieLv13

The story development is good tbh, but the character design leaves more to be desired. he's or was an adult for god's sake and the way he readins is no way for an adult should reason. And this is simply a wish fulfilment ff but it's too much. What? if you wanted the full Otsustsuki package why didn't you just become a SI in the Uchiha, Senju, Hyuga or Uzumaki clan while also wishing for a chakra breeder reactor, that way we'll know what we came to read. this is just you destroying my perfect Naruto story. You're just redoing the whole Naruto plot with slight deviations. It gets boring fast NB: This isn't me being rude or overly criticizing you. This is my honest thoughts, author. do with it as you see fit.

1yr
HardKiller07
HardKiller07Lv4

le daré una oportunidad, porque? porque no? y le daré 5 estrellas, porque? por que no?

1yr
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